26-01-2025, 12:04 AM
(This post was last modified: 26-01-2025, 12:27 AM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Man , To be Honest . I like the ending . You should have add one more chapter to show the build up , The planning phase and the training phase of Husband in Jail . It felt rushed but I understand your reasoning behind it . Never Mind I loved .
And the twist in the END , SNEHA . Man , The Kid though He is man now still in danger. I guess sajida and Rahim is alive so they might go after him . I hope , Santosh had already prepared the Rajesh's kid to handle these SCUM .
Waiting for your Next Story !
And the twist in the END , SNEHA . Man , The Kid though He is man now still in danger. I guess sajida and Rahim is alive so they might go after him . I hope , Santosh had already prepared the Rajesh's kid to handle these SCUM .
Waiting for your Next Story !