25-01-2025, 02:31 AM
Exiciting updats Mr.jeevi bharath , malini nalan portion, and three friends conversation about nalan , radhika prediction about nalan ( malalini - nalan seduction) .The radhika parents conversation also too good...
Every authors having different writing style , i mean the story narration you made it ... I Really wonder to read a story , not this only , your other stories , you just writing jolly mindset but some it very depthful like nalan- malini after seduction nalan suddenly stop to avioding her...its was very influencial .....the way narrate the story too awsome... I was waiting for your further updates , how nalan life chages ...how he was chages ..........
Finally thaks a lot for spending your valuable time.... Thank you...
Every authors having different writing style , i mean the story narration you made it ... I Really wonder to read a story , not this only , your other stories , you just writing jolly mindset but some it very depthful like nalan- malini after seduction nalan suddenly stop to avioding her...its was very influencial .....the way narrate the story too awsome... I was waiting for your further updates , how nalan life chages ...how he was chages ..........
Finally thaks a lot for spending your valuable time.... Thank you...