24-01-2025, 04:06 PM
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(23-01-2025, 09:21 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: With lots of eroticism and hot sex, the fantasy was portrayed very well and vividly.
Meena's inner turmoil, - which was still present but only weakly pronounced -, and her longing to finally come
to the surface seemed very real.
Both characters acted believably in a ‘realistic’ scenario.
Nadir showed us that he can be a real Casanova.
He intoxicated Meena with his desire, his deep affection and love and in the end, through his masterful skill
and control, managed to channel her emotions and send her into a sexual-emotional frenzy.
I liked that Nadir mentioned the names of Farzan and Cyrus alongside Tahir and included all the nameless fellow
travellers on the bus. Because I can imagine how she was flooded and carried away by a wave of lust every time
- during this allusion - ...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
As always... A Meticulous, precise, and masterful analysis from Lollo,
I hope others who read our narrate (and I notice it, there are some who read it), at least to try to drive it on, to make it advance... Just say and write "nice writing", "not bad story", "nonsense", "clumsy", and so on!
Thank you freund,
Best wishes,
Salir