Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Okay in my opinion , for now part R is my favorite chapter because you have done something really good with Kunal. I was feeling a bit dismayed with the idea of Kunal being less than a side character but him to be entered into a character who is odd one in Priya's mind game is quiet interesting. Honestly , I would love it if instead of Esha and Priya exploiting their revenge game , Turn Kunal into the ace of this game and have him play the unwilling player that chooses to defy and rebel against the controller. And here in this case the Facilitator , have Kunal show some mental prowess to rival Priya's mind game or better yet , have him play his own mind game with Priya or let them fall in love. That would add an interesting arc to this story.