Fantasy Husband making trap to wife gone wrong

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Nice story. Seductive and tempting. Good creation, keep it up!

I felt that it is unrealistic and running too fast. A conservative wife, who turned suddenly into a bitch. It’s not that easy for a women to admit and changeover. It takes too many attempts, but you didn’t showed them. Those will be the magical moments of the story. Try to keep that up in the story, it will give a good structure to your story.

But this is a very good compilation and creative thoughts. Good work…