18-01-2025, 11:16 PM
This is really an amazing concept! I had stopped visiting the site for a while because there was no new and interesting concepts of story.
Thank you for being brave to start a new story with a fresh perspective. I logged back in just to give my words of appreciation
I am blown away up until now and very keenly anticipating what will be the next move!
Mooni is really a master mind and love to see how she'll play Shweta. Love the fact that the name of maid and the narrator is Mooni;)
Please do continue.
You definitely have talent in terms of visualization, my constructive suggestion is try to elaborate certain interactions, like close meetings between Shweta and Mr. Sharma, that'll add more eroticism ( I am sure you can add this as story progresses) and also with each intimate interaction, just like how you vividly paint the outer scenery or inner atmosphere of the environment, similarly also portray physical bodily features of Shweta as well as the old man.
Good luck! we are here to support
Thank you for being brave to start a new story with a fresh perspective. I logged back in just to give my words of appreciation
I am blown away up until now and very keenly anticipating what will be the next move!
Mooni is really a master mind and love to see how she'll play Shweta. Love the fact that the name of maid and the narrator is Mooni;)
Please do continue.
You definitely have talent in terms of visualization, my constructive suggestion is try to elaborate certain interactions, like close meetings between Shweta and Mr. Sharma, that'll add more eroticism ( I am sure you can add this as story progresses) and also with each intimate interaction, just like how you vividly paint the outer scenery or inner atmosphere of the environment, similarly also portray physical bodily features of Shweta as well as the old man.
Good luck! we are here to support
