16-01-2025, 04:14 AM
Once I mentioned before about this story being so far from actual reality that it annoys more and more we read it.
Kunal accepted earlier from Priya that its his problem that his wife is having an affair and took the blame, that is such a bullshit and forced writing, Now Esha knowing Priya about her manipulative behavior, seeing her showing private pics earlier which is a breach of trust, trusts her again and takes pills from her...Who does this shit?
Man, if at all you want to write erotica, seems like you are very good with sex scenes and showing how well you can describe it , go for stories like authors Aurelius or Shiprat writes where the premise for sex is set right at the beginning with no nonsense..why write trying to build a plot but with such gigantic loop holes which doesn't make sense at all.
~RCF
Kunal accepted earlier from Priya that its his problem that his wife is having an affair and took the blame, that is such a bullshit and forced writing, Now Esha knowing Priya about her manipulative behavior, seeing her showing private pics earlier which is a breach of trust, trusts her again and takes pills from her...Who does this shit?
Man, if at all you want to write erotica, seems like you are very good with sex scenes and showing how well you can describe it , go for stories like authors Aurelius or Shiprat writes where the premise for sex is set right at the beginning with no nonsense..why write trying to build a plot but with such gigantic loop holes which doesn't make sense at all.
~RCF