12-01-2025, 08:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 13-01-2025, 12:20 PM by lou12. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I think frequently changing the perspective breaks the continuity and spoils the fun. You can switch between beta and ladka’s pov, which would be fine.
Great story, keep it going.
Great story, keep it going.