Adultery My Shy Mom Seduced And Fucked by Sir Suresh
(10-01-2025, 05:55 PM)Kundi lover Wrote: The narration is really superb(especially the voyeurism). But the most interesting part was your vivid description of the humongous buttocks of both sunita and jaya, especially the asshole part and the scene in which rajeev gets lucky in bathroom with jaya's panties and the delicious taste and shitty smell from the part of her panties that holds her asshole. The episode where jaya blows with her  shitty brown chocolate on arjun's dick was deliciously nasty. In the last episode too rajeev fingering priya's asshole was hot but do rajeev get a chance to finger and taste the spicy asshole of any of the mommy(jaya/sunita). whenever you are talking about sunita's/jaya's asshole , i was literally salivating. If rajeev gets a chance to taste it would be awesome with your detailed narration.

Thank you friend. Yeah, I noticed a lot of writers feel shy to write about nasty stuff when they actually happen. For me I like to keep things real and natural as they happen in real time. No bullshit!

I don't hide stuff. I say it as it is because a story becomes interesting and engaging when nothing is being hidden from the readers.

And yeah, more description is on the way. I like writing in detailed so that readers can understand both characters and also immerse themselves into the story.

I want you guys to feel as if you are in the story yourselves experiencing it. 

Stay tuned! Next long update is on the way tomorrow!
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RE: My Shy Mom Seduced And Fucked by Sir Suresh - by nadia - 11-01-2025, 12:24 AM



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