Yesterday, 08:44 AM
To everyone arguing in the comments regarding who did what and which character is the worst and who is the bitch. You are all fighting a loosing fight. Because lets be honest there are no good guys here. We're reading and feeling this story through a single person's eyes so in a way we can all agree that we can all understand Krish. But we cannot say the same for either Meera or Desai since they are all POV characters. But just like all of you , why do I myself also want a happy ending for Krish?
The answer is simple. Krish is us , we are seeing and feeling the story through his eyes and deep down we are all aware that Krish was never an ideal person to begin with. Do we relate to Krish as a cuckold because we all are cuckolds? Absolutely Not!
We relate to him because unlike other characters we are aware of his thought process , his feelings , his mindset , his assumptions. But that doesn't mean he can be right all times.
Let me give you an example , in the original ending of this story in Chapter 41 when Desai convinces Meera that he loves her and wants to be with her and Meera agrees and break up with Krish. Krish is shattered as they have sex without a care for Krish's presence there. Krish believed that he truely lost Meera and that she will now only love Desai until he met Parvathy and realized he cannot just let go off her. But when he returned home and listened to the recording of last night he learned that Meera always loved Krish. She admits she walked this path with Krish knowing this was dangerous , but she believed that Krish would care for her and not push it further but he did. She simply wants Krish to move on because she believes Krish will never change as long as Meera is with him. That is when Krish realizes his mistake and he lated on confesses his feelings for Meera and she reciprocates it back. They both have done terrible things but whatever they did , they did it together. They were a team and that is what mattered to them.
The very same thing is happening here , Meera is admiiting she has feelings for Desai , but she is also admitting it because she wants to stay away from the Voyeur Krish. Even now she is not willing to let go off Krish because surprisingly she still loves him but this cuckolding kink and his voyeuristic looks are bothering Meera. And Meera believes Krish is not going to stop because he doesn't want to stop , that is what Meera believes. But last chapter showed that Krish's love for Meera dominates his cuckolding. Despite watching them have sex in that room secretly and up close , not once did Krish jerk off or he ejaculated. He was more heartbroken seeing them behaving like a couple than feel excited. This was the tell tale sign that there can be improvement in Krish's behavior , he can overcome his kink with the right push. But before that he needs to win back his Meera.
At the end of the day , we cannot relate to Meera or Desai anymore than we can with Krish because he is our eyes and ears and we are reading and feeling this story through him. And in many ways we all share our perspective that what the ideal ending to Krish should be. Some usual "Kink Shame" comments would say Meera should be impregnated by Desai and have Krish raise their kids as his own wanting to urge to label Krish as a definite cuckold. Some commentors who prefer "sex" over story would want Meera leave Krish and go with Desai so that they can feel satisfied with the reality that Meera and Desai will spend the rest of their life fucking and sucking. Other "Krish" lovers would either want Krish to break up with Meera because she is a "Bitch".
Then there is people like me who want the best for Krish. Like genuinly want Krish to amend and change his ways and let go off his "cuckolding" kink. That is the ending I want and I honestly don't care whether Meera is with him or not , but a part of me would be more happy if Meera is with him. Everytime the author states "There is no such thing as an Ex-Cuckold" it pains me , because I want to see Krish as an Ex-Cuckold. I want Krish to rise from the ground and go from the Underdog to an Achiever. I always envisioned Krish getting materialistic pleasures and fame and becoming a bigger name but still staying the good hearted man that he is. I imagine Vicky Security Service evolve and rebranded into Krish International and becoming a big empire under Krish's leadership soaring to new heights. In a way I believed that loosing Meera would make him focus on better parts in life. Or on the contrary , Meera stays with him as Krish grows and evolves into a much better person.
It's like I said , I understand many people's comments and ideas and I strongly suggest to stop making these characters good or bad because it is not that simple. Just give the author the time he needs to complete it the way he feels and after that we can judge whether we are satisfied with this story or not. One thing is for sure , writers like krish_999 , game40it and now the very recent clearlover are some really good story tellers. And I liked their stories and narration to the point that I myself am trying to dwelve into story telling with my own work which I am working on and I will sharing with you when it is done.
That being said , I request all commentors to wait and see how the author ends the story and then later we can judge it based on our preferences. For now just share your own perspectives and ideas on how you would want to story to end and maybe put forward some ideas for the author to explore.
Have a Nice Day Everyone!
HARRY JORDAN
The answer is simple. Krish is us , we are seeing and feeling the story through his eyes and deep down we are all aware that Krish was never an ideal person to begin with. Do we relate to Krish as a cuckold because we all are cuckolds? Absolutely Not!
We relate to him because unlike other characters we are aware of his thought process , his feelings , his mindset , his assumptions. But that doesn't mean he can be right all times.
Let me give you an example , in the original ending of this story in Chapter 41 when Desai convinces Meera that he loves her and wants to be with her and Meera agrees and break up with Krish. Krish is shattered as they have sex without a care for Krish's presence there. Krish believed that he truely lost Meera and that she will now only love Desai until he met Parvathy and realized he cannot just let go off her. But when he returned home and listened to the recording of last night he learned that Meera always loved Krish. She admits she walked this path with Krish knowing this was dangerous , but she believed that Krish would care for her and not push it further but he did. She simply wants Krish to move on because she believes Krish will never change as long as Meera is with him. That is when Krish realizes his mistake and he lated on confesses his feelings for Meera and she reciprocates it back. They both have done terrible things but whatever they did , they did it together. They were a team and that is what mattered to them.
The very same thing is happening here , Meera is admiiting she has feelings for Desai , but she is also admitting it because she wants to stay away from the Voyeur Krish. Even now she is not willing to let go off Krish because surprisingly she still loves him but this cuckolding kink and his voyeuristic looks are bothering Meera. And Meera believes Krish is not going to stop because he doesn't want to stop , that is what Meera believes. But last chapter showed that Krish's love for Meera dominates his cuckolding. Despite watching them have sex in that room secretly and up close , not once did Krish jerk off or he ejaculated. He was more heartbroken seeing them behaving like a couple than feel excited. This was the tell tale sign that there can be improvement in Krish's behavior , he can overcome his kink with the right push. But before that he needs to win back his Meera.
At the end of the day , we cannot relate to Meera or Desai anymore than we can with Krish because he is our eyes and ears and we are reading and feeling this story through him. And in many ways we all share our perspective that what the ideal ending to Krish should be. Some usual "Kink Shame" comments would say Meera should be impregnated by Desai and have Krish raise their kids as his own wanting to urge to label Krish as a definite cuckold. Some commentors who prefer "sex" over story would want Meera leave Krish and go with Desai so that they can feel satisfied with the reality that Meera and Desai will spend the rest of their life fucking and sucking. Other "Krish" lovers would either want Krish to break up with Meera because she is a "Bitch".
Then there is people like me who want the best for Krish. Like genuinly want Krish to amend and change his ways and let go off his "cuckolding" kink. That is the ending I want and I honestly don't care whether Meera is with him or not , but a part of me would be more happy if Meera is with him. Everytime the author states "There is no such thing as an Ex-Cuckold" it pains me , because I want to see Krish as an Ex-Cuckold. I want Krish to rise from the ground and go from the Underdog to an Achiever. I always envisioned Krish getting materialistic pleasures and fame and becoming a bigger name but still staying the good hearted man that he is. I imagine Vicky Security Service evolve and rebranded into Krish International and becoming a big empire under Krish's leadership soaring to new heights. In a way I believed that loosing Meera would make him focus on better parts in life. Or on the contrary , Meera stays with him as Krish grows and evolves into a much better person.
It's like I said , I understand many people's comments and ideas and I strongly suggest to stop making these characters good or bad because it is not that simple. Just give the author the time he needs to complete it the way he feels and after that we can judge whether we are satisfied with this story or not. One thing is for sure , writers like krish_999 , game40it and now the very recent clearlover are some really good story tellers. And I liked their stories and narration to the point that I myself am trying to dwelve into story telling with my own work which I am working on and I will sharing with you when it is done.
That being said , I request all commentors to wait and see how the author ends the story and then later we can judge it based on our preferences. For now just share your own perspectives and ideas on how you would want to story to end and maybe put forward some ideas for the author to explore.
Have a Nice Day Everyone!
HARRY JORDAN
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