[amzad2004]

By choosing Desai as a Meera's lover by Author Krish is the biggest mistake has made by him to take the standard of this story to the gutter. Only gold digger women have fake strong bond with the sugar daddy like desai. There definitely could not build strong bond between genuine working wife who is in her early 30's and sugar daddy figure who is in his late 50's. Author Krish should selected a character as meera's lover who is 27 -30 years old. He could be either Krish's colleague or Meera's. As Author krish is highly skilled story writer it is very painful to see that he writes on very low standards plot with a high skilled writing capability. It becomes very low standard sex story only. Not even a normal standard erotic story. Generally even genuine cuck husbands did not dare to share their wives with whom are superior to them. You can not built a erotic plot based on 100% unrealistic plot. It is not possible to build such a bond what showed between Meera and Desai. It might arouse among those readers who are teenagers and those who are still fortunate to sleep on a bed of roses and not seen the real world. Mature readers must be felt disgusted. It is more painful because Author Krish is highly skilled writer. I could not understand why he is wasting his such super talented skill by writing on the low class plot. Until part-2 it was ok. I only assume it is because of not having diversity writing skill or Author Krish himself is in very young age. Hope he will be able to write some very high standard erotic story in future.