Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
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I have given all my thoughts about rewritten chapters in this one.

Did Krish_999 make it better or worse by rewriting several parts of this story? That’s the hot topic no one is discussing.

I will tell you guys my version, as usual my comment is huge. If not interested, please skip it. It also explains why I do not think Meera as a whore but still a great character but made weaker.
When we asked for more clarity regarding Meera’s perspective or better clarity on the relationship between Krish and Meera. Several readers who were hoping for an ending that is different where Desai and Meera could get together were also hopeful, they will get to see it if we ask for a better explanation. So finally, Krish agreed to rewrite it. I personally did not want the ending changed but there were open questions about choices of the 3 main characters for different incidents that lack clarity so wanted him to rewrite the last 2 chapters with more dialogues to go through the loop ends and close it. I did not realize the author would make it more complicated.

Whether we understand his plot or not or maybe I am totally wrong her for interpreting ti this way, doesn't matter one thing is clear, that for every story to progress further the characters in it should have natural progression or they should evolve into better or for worse.
Two things that closed the story last time which should obviously need to change to open the story back again:
1. Nidhi’s confession making Desai a villain so Meera would hate him.
2. Meera leaving Krish and having final sex with Desai to make him believe it that she moved on, there by Krish depressed leaves the house and returns next day to claim her back. This whole sequence needs to go away.
The author did the same as expected but instead of just erasing the sequences he added two things here...
1. Nidhi confession came as expected but it came to Krish instead of Meera and Desai on the other hand got brownie points for confessing himself.
2. Meera did not leave Krish as was previous ending obviously but instead she forgave him and here too the fault for the fight was pushed onto Desai but with mild impact from Meera. Here too Desai got brownie points for making sure Krish and Meera do not part ways. He gets to be the one who stops Meera from leaving.
Now we analyze these two changes and two additions. We clearly see Desai needs to be in good books of Meera for the story to continue...but Author conveniently forgot one thing to make things different. In his original ending Nidhi questions Desai that its not consensual what he did because
“You blackmailed me to start it all. Did you forget it?"” Did that change in this rewritten chapter? No, it did not. So, Desai is still the r*pist that we know him, its just that once blackmailed to an extent Nidhi offered herself which she did not do it in last part. So it all make it easy for Meera to forgive him...not such a good plot here and you are actually making your other character weak here – Meera, not Desai.
Anyways, moving on, why do Author want Desai in good books of Meera obviously for 1 of the 2 things below
1. He needs Desai for more sex scenes with Meera for readers to enjoy continuation plus to be a hero and get Meera at the end, so if his plot takes it there or not we shall see at the end.
2. He needs Desai for more sex scenes with Meera for readers to enjoy continuation plus his plot could be natural progression of how each character turns into in their life as the story is not stopped at that time and continued further, what will be the situations that could arrive and how the events of the story might change.
Krish_999 is one of our most valuable writers on this forum. I believe the reason he erased everything is for second reason here...he wants to take the story through natural progression and show readers how each character will develop if Krish continues to spiral further into his cuckoldry. Brilliant Idea! No words are enough to praise him for his style of thinking. Apart from Nidhi’s episode, which is not easy to fix, everything else is perfect if we can conveniently ignore Desai’s past.
So how is the natural progression coming along? Let’s see

1. Desai - His progression is enormous; he evolved from a sinner to great wholehearted person. He evolved into someone who fell in love, cares about others, wins a place in Meera's heart, He successfully established as someone in Meera’s life that she cares a lot, he has taken second place in her life and of course aiming for first as of now, he wants to become her husband now based on last chapter and it seems to be his inner goal, and he wants Meera for himself though he claims before Meera that he is OK with non-exclusiveness. From the point where he started to this point, he has ruled the story. There are literally 0 setbacks...I mean 0. People thinking that he is the hero to this story is not a fantasy. It’s surreal but it’s the reality of this story.  
The real setback for Desai will only show up when his assumption that Krish is a cuckold is no longer true. He keeps saying to Meera to confess to Krish and not cheat. So a man who is so desperate for Meera and literally dreaming about her in his life, why would he ask her to do one thing that could threaten his affair? That’s only because of two reasons – 1. Either he thinks 100% that Krish will come to peace with his arrangement and cheating and allow Meera to continue their affair. 2. Or he is ready to face the ultimate test where if Krish rejects the offer and confronts Meera about her cheating and leaves her or maybe asks her to choose him or Desai. If Krish leaves, then Desai can slowly make Meera his wife, comfort for months, if necessary, we have seen the patience Desai shows. Let’s say if Krish does not leave Meera and he asks her to choose, and she chooses Krish then he is hopeful that one Day Meera vexed with her life with Krish with no chemistry, only soul less love, might come back to him for the life he has shown her all these months. What could happen…Only Author knows at this point. Either way, win – win situation for Desai with a lot of probability to win here. He has aces in his pocket…what to do...Author has soft spot for him :P

2. Meera – Meera is the queen of complication in this story. I know for a fact that she is also most misunderstood character in this story…OK …OK it’s my comment so I have freedom to be biased lol , Lets see her progression after the ending is erased, Her feelings have not changed much…In her mind she is the same wife who loves her husband and She is the same lover who likes her Susheel…Its time Desai has to leave because he messed up. He caused the fight; he made her call Krish mental patient. He brought a girl into their home and fucked her. Partially she thinks it her fault because she did not allow Desai to even touch her and that too, being in the same house so she sees it as his desperation to cool it off. Since Nidhi offered herself, she doesn’t see much fault in it, and she is conveniently ignoring the blackmail part as it is for knowing the truth that the person in the car is not Krish. Anyways, her real struggle starts once Desai leaves the home. She misses him at night obviously, but she started to feel for the first time to miss him as a person. The reason is clear, when Krish is bedridden she spends most of her time with Desai in the same home. She spent time with Krish near his bed to keep him company but the rest of the time she was with Desai. They even walked everywhere, to temples, parties and almost lived as a couple. For the first time she saw a different kind of life, like an alternate version in multiverse in Marvel movie. Here her husband is Desai...She felt so secured, safe and of course whether Desai genuinely showing affection or faking it or really loves her, doesn’t matter but he pours his soul into making Meera feel like a queen. She started to feel that warmth, that attention, that caring and more importantly that intimacy which comes from passionate sex though there is no sex at that time, she knows how it feels. Once Desai leaves, she starts to miss it so much that her world turned upside down, can you imagine if this is same Meera who did not allow Desai to even touch her when Krish is bedridden? Where is that, Meera? She is changed, she got changed by Desai when Krish is bedridden. She loves Krish but she has seen the multi verse too…She began to miss Desai at nights, days. He is on her mind all the time. Hence despite various efforts by Krish to make love to her, her body never responded as mind is trapped in multiverse. She realized that she inadvertently made a serious bond with Desai. She is now concerned about her Krish and her marriage. She lost control of her life. Hence, she could not resist Desai on concert night, gave in to her temptations and desire. Once she commits to it, she sees that she has messed up, she begs Krish to forgive her. She commits to Krish that she won’t repeat it. When she sees Desai next time at the wedding, she ignores him, she shows hatred despite in her heart, she feels bad for him, she is visibly frustrated but that is only seen to Krish. When they return home, Our Krish proposes wonderful opportunity to tempt his wife. Meera listens to it and cannot believe what Krish is saying, but again she gets tempted to meet Desai, spend time with him and share more moments from the multiverse. Its like a drug now for her…She agrees to meet him and when she gets the drug now, she decides that she needs this drug more, she cannot resist it anymore…So she agrees to cheat her husband. It breaks her heart, but she cannot do much about it. She feels bad for herself, she feels bad for Krish. She hates herself but she wants to be with Desai and steal more moments from the multi verse. I question here..to the Author…what the fucking fuck (Pardon me) have you done with this storyyyy..what were you even thinking? This was my comment yesterday about dragging characters beyond their limited lines, once they cross it there is no going back…Meera loves Krish with all her heart, but Desai is a kind of drug she cannot stay away from. What will happen now? Author can give Meera neither …Desai nor Krish…we have seen how Meera is with Krish and no Desai…Meera with Desai and no Krish in her life will be even worse. With out her heart, Drug will only impact brain but there is no heart to enjoy it.

3. Krish – With out Krish there is no story. We all love him, we cry with him, we laugh with him, and we feel his pain. We sympathize with him, we even hate him but if he is not there, there is nothing in this story that matters. Without him, No Meera matters, No Desai matter. As my friend Lollo said, Krish is the soul of this story. We read this beautiful saga through his eyes. I am sure lot more like me connect with this story at obsession levels and they look Krish as a hero. Can you imagine a guy who is subjected to so much stress, pressure, addiction and desperation all the time always hoped only one thing all this story. Don’t take my Meera away from me. He lived and breathed for Meera, she is on his mind 24/7 and constantly thinking about her and her only. Guy would give away his life for her with a smile and people want him to move on and find another woman lol. With all such good qualities he also has a good heart and a genuine one. He is charming and sweet to everyone. Everyone likes him for his nature, Meera is lucky to have him in her life, I think she knows it. Hence despite knowing his cancer she stays with him and of course she at one point of time in her life enjoyed that cancer too.  Yes, Krish despite having so many good qualities has cancer like cuckold in him…Its spreading fast. So, his progression as expected is getting more impacted due to his cancer. He knows he is not making efforts to please Meera in bed, he thought that old Krish whose charm used to draw Meera to him is lost and he can never be Desai, but little did he know that Meera is also drugged like him and its not his efforts only that are the cause…Seeing no response from Meera he spiraled more into his old ways…imagining her with Desai in his head more and more and gave himself pleasure. He has two beasts always in his head all through this series…one that roars and tells him not to ever lose Meera and worries about losing her, and other one that roars and tells him to give the pleasure of seeing Meera with Desai. He fell for both and feeds both. His other beast is stronger all this while and played a major role in this story in taking this shape. The first beast will only become aggressive if he sees he is almost at the verge of losing Meera. I guess its time... We have to see which beast will kill which one…

Also, if Cuck beast kills Love beast then Krish will settle down with both Desai and Meera and become a submissive cuckold…many stories here so I do not think that is the ending. So obviously Love beast kills Cuck beast...but will it be enough or is it too late?
What about the multi verse Meera has seen? How will she cure her drug addiction?
What will Krish do if Meera wants love and drug both? Drug will eventually consume Meera entirely leaving no room for love. If only the heart is intact, but the brain is drugged what’s the use of heart?  What can Krish do?

Who can help this couple, I see no way out...hence I said too many more knots on to the thread with no way of removing them. Either all go separate ways ...figure out a way to live or all live together and make Krish a pathetic loser solely living for happiness of Meera.
If only Meera could forget her multi verse and Desai. Is there a solution that I might not think off, but our brilliant author has thought of it on how to make Meera survive with happiness in her life with out Desai?

Overall brilliant writing as always and no words could describe my respect for this writer. Also I feel bad for this story and the path its taken.

Holidays are over..time to get back to work! Happy reading and can't wait for rest of the two chapters..Last time when story is over it left a void for some days..I am sure it will again this time.

~RCF
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