Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

[bhukhalund]

Doston, ek baat kana chah raha hun, pasand na aaye to naraj mat hona. Chhota ya bada bhai samajh ke maaf kar dena.

Kahani mein jo abhi ho raha hai, khaskar Suchi aur Kanhaiya ko le kar, wo padh kar main bhi dukhi hun. Bahut ajeeb lag raha hai. Aisa nahin hai ki is story mein aur kisi ne randi pana nahin kiya hai. Pata nahin kyon lekin Mujhe bhi bahut gussa aaya tha. Lekin sochne wali baat ye hai, ki writer ko hi pata hota hai ki kya likhna hai aur kyon likhna hai.

BL bhai ne bhi agar ye likha hai to kuchh soch kar hi likha hoga. We can only wait and watch. Haan apni bhawnaon aur vicharon se hum ko writer ko jatana koi buri baat nahin hai. Lekin saath hi hum logon ko writer ko support bhi karna hoga.

Ye sab maine apne  vichar likhe hain, pls don't take it otherwise.

Kahani bahut hi badhiya chal rahi hai, aur aage chal kar aur bhi badhiya hogi aisi hi kaamna karta hun.

Aap ka bichar mujhe pasand aaya . Pahle Suchi ko lete hai. Kahani padhne waalo ko eisa laga kee Suchi sharif ladki hai , chudai ke dal-dal mei nahi giregi . Lekin shuru ke ghatnao par dhyan dijiye . Holi ke din jab Manu ne uss ke bur aur chuchi mei rang lagaya tabhi wo apni maa aur bhabhi jee tarah Manu se chudwane ke liye tarapne lagi . Manu nr ek baar bulaya to chudwane aa gaee . Bolkar gaee kee dubara nahi aayegi phir bhee aa gaee . Usse maalum ho gays thaa kee Manu uss kee maa ko chodta hai , yah jaan kar kya koi sharif ladki ussee admi se shadi karti ,  nahi karti. Jab koi pati apni patni ko totally ignore karne lage to wo aurat dusre mardo se attracted honne lagti hai . Kanhaiya aur Pramod uss ke liye sirf short term attraction  thaa . Uss ne baaki logo se chudwaya sirf iss darr se kee uss ka bang naa ho . Kanhaiya sirf ek attractive admi hai , kuchh kya bahut see maal usse pasand karti hai lekin Miththu ya Suchi nahi . 

Itna to mai jarur kahunga kee kuchh kaaranbas Suchi ne kaee dusre logo se chudwa lia lekin wo iss kahani kee sabse strong aur powerful character hai . Kanhaiya ab Manu ke raaste mei nahi aayega . 

Padhte rahiye .