Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[amzad2004]

Excessive pampering of Author Krish caused undeveloped writing diversity skill. The standard of the story is getting nose down. In the last 7 chapters there are 5 of them about old man sex adventures. How pathetic and painful it is! What a waste of talent like author krish. Excessive pampering creates obstacle to have desire to develop the diversity writing skill of writer krish. He should immediately remove the whole part-3 and re-write it. It must be excluded the Old man Desai. It will be very kind full to have some explanation from Writer krish is that why the all part 1,2,3 has written on the old man plot? This is not erotic plot at all.