05-01-2025, 11:56 PM
This part has became too much pathetic and painful to read. I wounder how could sex adventure with the old man can be erotic. I think Author Krish has no writing ability other than old man plot. He has no diversity in writing skill. Very unfortunate. He should re-write the whole part-3 exclude Desai and include some teen age characters. Story must progress only with the sex adventures without any emotional attachments.