Adultery The Facilitator

[DeanWinchester00007]

One thing I have always noticed in majority of the cuckold stories in this site is that the character of the husband has no self respect whatsoever. Only two stories stand out to me.

First one was obviously I had mentioned before , the story My Wife , Why Did She Betray Me by game40it. Though the story wasn't exactly a cuckold one since the husband never showed any kinks and was more about his heartbreak. But the character handling of the Husband was top notch.

Second story was the famous Knowing My Wife and Knowing Me by Krish_999. This one was truly special because it was a POV story through the husband. The character emotions and development were handled great and I absolutely loved the ending of Part II. However , the third part is currently going the same route as any usual cuckold story where the husband goes to humiliation after humiliation.

A humble request to every writer in this site , I request to write stories that shows Husbands not as loosers but rather complex characters in the future. I am sick and tired of the husband character being treated like trash , story after story which has made me spend more time in Literotica than this site nowadays. It has become such a repetative trope and a boring one for that matter. Then the usual kinky comments about husband staying looser and if he is a father , his son should also be a loser.

Here in this story , Kunal isn't exactly a full on cuckold. Yes , he had an experience one night where to understand something , he humiliated himself. But that can be easily fixsed because this is a man who is actually trying his best to save his marriage. The story points to the direction to another "Wimpy Cuckold Husband" story but please I humble request the author not to go that route because there is enough stories like that in this site.

Bring some freshness , add some depths to the characters of this story. Give them interesting plots to work on , a cool backstory.

Kunal in this story is barely explored , you can easily add some cool backstory and dynamic that will add much more intrigue to the character. I love your writing style and theme in your story , but the one thing that bothers me in this story is the handling of Kunal because since the beginning he is being unfairly victimised and is now getting set up over and over again for more humiliation and depression.

As a fan , I recommend the following direction or dynamic that you can add which can add life to the story.

Instead of taking the usual Cuckold route , keep the affair between Esha and Aniket a secret since Esha doesn't want Kunal to know she cheated again. Kunal being oblivious remains the same but eventually he finds out about the affair. But instead of falling into the cesspool of cuckolding , Kunal realizes the embarassment that happened on Esha's birthday night escapade and decides to never take that cuckold path. Not only does he feels cheated but he is heartbroken. So he completely cuts out Esha from his heart. Kunal decides to live his life for one thing and one thing only , taking care of his son. Kunal tells Esha that they can continue their marriage only for the sake of Aditya , he puts forward a condition that they will continue their marriage until Aditya turns 10 and then they will seek divorce and Kunal will take care of Aditya and Esha can live her life with Aniket.

Kunal becomes cold hearted , since Esha cheated on him not only once but twice. He starts to get shallow and ruthless. He works in bettering his physical look and mental stability. Judging by how Kunal goes to US regarding work , we can say his job is quiet a big one. Kunal starts to never trust a woman , he spends his life taking care of Aditya spending time with him. Just like how Kunal changed for Esha , this time he brings some changes in him to become an ideal father for Aditya. But his belief in love and marriage is completely tarnished. He eventually meets Priya and actually agrees with her that Marriage is indeed a sham and he understands her issues with it.

Priya when she sees this new Kunal starts to have feelings for him but Kunal rejects it. That is when Priya realize that in her game of revenge against Esha , Kunal had become an unexpected victim and Esha's betrayal has completely broken him. Priya could no longer control Kunal because his mindset and attention has been gone from Esha. This frustrates Priya because she cannot no longer play her game of control because one player has already moved out of her game of deception.

This is just my perspective , and I just thought about this only because I am fed up of the usual cuckold routes for the husbands in this story. In my eyes I believe this would be a better approach to handling Kunal's character and this can take the story to some interesting dynamics and angles. This is just my two cents of ideas you can explore.

I know the author has stated he has the story complete and you have already reached the chapter O that means there is only 11 more chapters left until this story is complete. I also state that you won't be changing the story but as a fan I am just stating this idea so that maybe you can explore something like this in a future story. Once again I really like your story writing and the literature style but until I don't like where the story is going. I hope I change my mind about this story once it is complete so I can see the big picture.

With Regards.

Harry Jordan!

One thing I have always noticed in majority of the cuckold stories in this site is that the character of the husband has no self respect whatsoever. Only two stories stand out to me.

Man , this exactly was my criticism , Its not that its bad thing , Its just its getting too repetitive at this point . Its like All husband are born cucks. 
I read the stories by Writer name CindyTV on Literotica , that changed my perspective about these cuckold stories , Where Husband revolt against against getting cuckold . That when i think this is getting old , same old storyline , wife cheats , husband become cuck etc etc .