Incest அம்மா உன்னை ஒரு தடவை ப்ளீஸ்.. 01 ❤️
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(04-01-2025, 07:41 PM)Its me Wrote: Flawless writing.. From start to end you just nailed it bro.. You kept the balance between the love and lust scenes with mom and son.. And more importantly I hardly found the spelling mistakes.. Eventhough the storyline is perfect spelling mistakes will ruin the story.. but you have managed to avoid that mistake bro.. And space between the dialogues is also neat and clean.. so the readers can read the story without any irritations.. keep it up bro..

Heart Thank you so much.. your words pleasing and motivate me much..
I am very much concern about spelling mistakes and flow of the story..
If I am satisfied with that.. then I ll upload it'. 
Once again so much..
Vinod  Namaskar
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RE: அம்மா உன்னை ஒரு தடவை ப்ளீஸ்.. 01 ❤️ - by Vinodvino - 04-01-2025, 07:47 PM



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