04-01-2025, 07:41 PM
Flawless writing.. From start to end you just nailed it bro.. You kept the balance between the love and lust scenes with mom and son.. And more importantly I hardly found the spelling mistakes.. Eventhough the storyline is perfect spelling mistakes will ruin the story.. but you have managed to avoid that mistake bro.. And space between the dialogues is also neat and clean.. so the readers can read the story without any irritations.. keep it up bro..