Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Guys , here is the new year update. These updates are coming soon as I have already  parts written which is easy to be arranged and posted. However, there may be a time when I would be busy and it will take from two to three weeks for update.

Meanwhile keep commenting. I love both negative and positive reply. I want story in a specific direction, which I will continue doing , without any influence from readers. However, I appreciate the efforts to read closely and comment on story.

A short and sweet update but a welcome one. I really like your limited literature approach to this story to be honest. Though as a fan I may just ask. I would like you to explore Kunal a bit more. And I believe you want to make Priya as the central character in the story since she is the master manipulator but it would be a cool approach if an Antithesis of Priya exist. I can see that in Kunal. Since his backstory is not much explored , you can build a dark past type story and make Kunal aware of Priya's actions and then have both of them play a game of chess but Kunal fighting for his life while Priya fighting for control. 

Eventually the story will cultimate in Kunal fighting hard and winning while Priya's whole perspective and idea of Feminism she so embraces fall apart and she falls down from her glass castle and into her hell of suffering. Priya is a despicable person. She deserves the worst end. Especially considering how she is toying with the fate of the child.