Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Just a friendly request to Author. Though I am aware that you have almost the entire story complete with a draft , I humbly request to not turn Kunal into a wimp or a lesser man. Please don't make this story go through that same "Loser Cuckold" path. Atleast for once in a story , let us have a man stand for himself and his family. We've not explored Kunal in this story until now so lets make his character interesting. Lets have him pit against Priya in psycological games and have him counter her influence in their relationship. Lets have Kunal really surprise Priya often and contradict and ruin her tactics that try to separate Kunal and Esha. Esha should eventually see the facade and realize Kunal is fighting for his marriage and see the true face of Priya. That is how she must learn to love Kunal than before. Add some mystery to Kunal like a cool backstory that Kunal had a dark history. Make him someone special than the usual loser these stories makes married men to be.