30-12-2024, 10:59 PM
(30-12-2024, 10:40 PM)Joseph Rayman Wrote: The story and narration are terrific.I think there is a small error. I don't think Aditya is a college going kid since Esha is just 32. He might just be a smal kid possibly a 1st standard or Sr. KG student.
Few questions that came to mind.
- Did Ankit buy new toys to Aditya
- Who takes care of Aditya when both are in office or when esha fuck with ankit in his apartment and who drops and pickup from college
- What kind of rapport Ankit develop with Aditya to impress Esha based on the whatsapp conversations.
- If Esha had a breakup with Ankit, why she still have the gifts in her home.
- Having known Esha love Ankit deeply, does kunal think that he can still match up with Ankit.
- Is that that easy for a woman to give up a person that showed a new part of her, made her feel alive and showed her heaven.
- How come Esha did not get pregnant even after repeated sex with Ankit and liters of potent semen poured inside here.