Adultery Nasima's fall

[turbora]

Hi Turbora,

The updates are good and I think I can kinda guess where the story is heading to but I have one request that please don't make Nasima's husband cuckold..... Let her keep this and her other extra marital affairs a secret from her husband.....
Also see if you don't make Nasima Golu and Moloy's bitch...... Instead if you want you can use this incident to ignite a fire for revenge in Nasima's heart so that she goes to any extent to get her revenge from Golu and Moloy.....

Also loved your use of Hindi dialogue and rewriting it in english..... I can understand it's an effort that you are putting in but this increases the pleasure of reading this story two folds.....

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Thanks. Your inputs mean a lot. Helps in the flow of writing. I already have a narrative in mind and will work on this and share soon. Keep reading and please do share feedback.