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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
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(29-12-2024, 10:07 AM)Sriya2 Wrote: Hopefully story achi lag rahi hogi ab tak. Aage ki story planned hai, par agla update shayad 3-4 din baad aaye. Agar possible hoga toh jaldi bhi aa sakta hai. Sabse jyada time photos aur gifs dhoondne mein lag jaata hai.

Hi Sriya,

Aapse maafi chahta hu ki maine abhi tak aapki story tasalli se padhi nahi hai..... Par upar upar se jitni bhi padhi hai aur jitni samajh aai hai uss hisaab se kehna chahunga ki aapki story bohot achi hai hai aur thodi realistic lagti hai jisse story padhne ka maza aur badh raha hai.....
Bohot kam hi females hai xossipy pe jo story likhti hai..... Aap ek achha female perspective iss story me add kar sakti hai.... Jisse readers ko ye pta chal paae ki unsatisfied housewives ke dimaag me kya chalta hai jab roz apne pati se unsatisfied reh jaati hai..... Dusre mardo me unhe kya cheeze attract karti hai ki wo apne pati ko cheat karti hai..... Jab wo apne pati ke alava alag alag mardon se sambandh banati hai to un mardon ko apne pati se aur apas me kese compare karti hai ye sab aap bohot aasaani se samajh sakti hai..... Esi stories likhne wale zyadatar writers yaha male hai to unki story achhi to hoti hai par ek aurat ka nazariya missing hota hai jo shayad aapki story me mil jaae..... Or zyadatar writers jo esi stories likhte hai wo itne lazy writers hote hai ki yaa to pehle ek do update me hi wife ka kisi aur se sex krwa dete hai yaa fir story esi likhte hai ki pati pehle se hi cuckold bnna chahta hai to usko koi fark nahi padta ki uski biwi kisse sex kar rahi hai use bas apna show chahiye roz apni biwi ki chudai ka..... Par abhi tak aapne story me esa kuch nahi kiya hai..... Story me lag raha hai ki Supriya ek unsatisfied Housewife hai jo apni sex life ko spice up karna chahti hai jiski shuruwat usne roleplay se ki hai..... I am sure ki kuch dino me wo iss roleplay se bhi bore ho jaaegi tab wo agle step pe badhegi jo ki hai kisi aur ke saath sex..... Par jab tak esa nahi hota tab Tak slow seduction rakhiye..... Story me naye characters laaiye..... Jo apni taraf se Supriya ko seduce karne ki puri koshish kare..... Supriya ke aashiq alag alag class ke ho sakte hai jese koi Atul ka boss, koi uska client, koi uska colleague, koi doodhwala, padosi, watchman..... Kehne ka matlab ye hai ki Supriya ko sab apni rakhel bnana chahte hai par Supriya kisi ek ki nahi hai..... Uska initial sex jo dusre mardo ke saath ho wo situational ho to behtar hai naa ki forced sex ho..... Aur aap ek tarah ka distinction class wise bhi apni story me rakh sakte hai..... Jese jo padhe likhe ho wo thode sophisticated ho, jo lower class ke ho unme se koi Supriya ko dominate karne ke liye use gaaliya de, sex ko sex nahi balki chudaai bole, kuch low class Supriya ko ese treat kare ki unhe koi sex ki devi mil gayi hai unki iccha Puri karne ke liye..... Kehne ka matlab ye hai ki Supriya ke har Aashiq ka character thoda sa alag ho look wise, age wise, behaviour wise..... Isse aapki story kabhi boring nahi hogi aur aapka bhi story likhne ka intrest bana rahega..... Supriya ke pati aur uske aashiqo ko bas yahi lagna chahiye ki Supriya bas unhi ki hai..... Jabki sirf Supriya hi jaanti hai ki wo kaha kaha kis kis ke saath muh maar rahi hai......
Ek aur baat aapne btaya ki scene ke hisaab se pics ya gifs dhundne me aapko dikkat hoti hai..... Wese to aap google pe pics ya gifs dhundne ka try kar sakti hai, waha aapko asaani se mil jaaengi but agar na mile to image dhundne me zada time mat waste Krna..... Aap story itni detail me likh rahi ho ki hum khud kya ho raha hai imagine kar lenge..... Bus koshish ye karna ki jitni jaldi ho sake aap updates de paae aur story puri complete kare jesi aapne sochi hai.....

All the best
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Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 11-12-2024, 03:16 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 12-12-2024, 06:15 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 12-12-2024, 07:23 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sintia - 13-12-2024, 04:18 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 13-12-2024, 08:31 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 13-12-2024, 08:34 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 13-12-2024, 08:43 PM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 13-12-2024, 09:07 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 16-12-2024, 10:39 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by r2413 - 17-12-2024, 12:54 PM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 20-12-2024, 07:46 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Mousumi - 20-12-2024, 08:48 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Ellma - 20-12-2024, 10:45 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 21-12-2024, 12:07 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Ellma - 21-12-2024, 10:16 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 21-12-2024, 07:55 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 21-12-2024, 09:34 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Rohit - 22-12-2024, 01:20 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 23-12-2024, 10:51 AM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Bentley - 23-12-2024, 09:36 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 24-12-2024, 10:47 AM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Raghu - 24-12-2024, 01:18 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 24-12-2024, 01:47 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Rohit - 25-12-2024, 10:07 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 25-12-2024, 02:29 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Aman34 - 25-12-2024, 07:54 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 25-12-2024, 10:21 AM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 25-12-2024, 11:46 AM
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RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 26-12-2024, 10:12 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 27-12-2024, 09:59 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 28-12-2024, 06:42 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 29-12-2024, 09:52 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 29-12-2024, 10:07 AM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Fuckstar - 30-12-2024, 07:40 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 30-12-2024, 09:44 PM
RE: Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani - by Sriya2 - 31-12-2024, 09:04 AM
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Ek cute si housewife ki kahani - by Sriya2 - 12-12-2024, 02:02 AM



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