Adultery Nasima's fall
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(28-12-2024, 09:50 PM)turbora Wrote: Please share your likes and comment. Will update tomorrow with the next part.

Hi Turbora,

The updates are good and I think I can kinda guess where the story is heading to but I have one request that please don't make Nasima's husband cuckold..... Let her keep this and her other extra marital affairs a secret from her husband.....
Also see if you don't make Nasima Golu and Moloy's bitch...... Instead if you want you can use this incident to ignite a fire for revenge in Nasima's heart so that she goes to any extent to get her revenge from Golu and Moloy.....

Also loved your use of Hindi dialogue and rewriting it in english..... I can understand it's an effort that you are putting in but this increases the pleasure of reading this story two folds.....
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Nasima's fall - by turbora - 28-12-2024, 06:19 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 28-12-2024, 07:59 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by Hotyyhard - 28-12-2024, 08:00 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by behka - 28-12-2024, 08:35 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 28-12-2024, 09:50 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by Fuckstar - 30-12-2024, 07:04 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 30-12-2024, 10:16 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by Desmond Miles - 28-12-2024, 10:23 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 30-12-2024, 12:31 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 30-12-2024, 12:33 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by Saikarthik - 30-12-2024, 03:04 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by K MD THABREZ - 01-01-2025, 12:59 AM
RE: Nasima's fall - by K MD THABREZ - 03-01-2025, 12:44 AM
RE: Nasima's fall - by turbora - 03-01-2025, 01:02 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by Biosys - 04-01-2025, 04:31 PM
RE: Nasima's fall - by K MD THABREZ - Yesterday, 09:54 PM



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