23-12-2024, 11:12 PM
Oh Man , this is dark , Killing characters like a fly . But as writer said its gonna be dark and gritty but i hope the writer add something in favor of husband so it makes story little balancing., Right now there is total domination of Goons , there was one character who could have stood against them was the sister but she died too soon , the husband is too weak he cannot fight back against the goons . I wish there should be a character who could become their savior just to give some balance to the story . Apart from the story is really good i really like this dark tone of story no mercy . Keep writing bro .