18-12-2024, 01:42 PM
(18-12-2024, 11:13 AM)intrepid Wrote: Hi KK…,
1) The pace of the story has become slow. While the sex scene with chacha was important to reflect the character transformation of Ganga, the actual scene went on and on.
2) Thanks for NOT having Javed ALSO have a sex scene with Ganga; otherwise, the story would have gotten even slower.
3) It’s time for Shrinu to make some tough decisions….i.e. confront Ganga and divorce her. An unattractive and a poor wife is a 1000% better than an attractive wife who is a cheat and a slut.
4) Thanks for the update, I read it while on my treadmill at the highest incline level and didn’t realize when 45 minutes went by.
Sincerely,
Intrepid







What ?? !! 'I read it while on my treadmill'