16-12-2024, 12:47 AM
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(15-12-2024, 11:15 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Krish definitely lacks flirting. The reason women fall for him is because he is honest and good hearted. Despite whatever the situation is Krish is willing to help when needed. There is no saints in this story , everyone has their own flaws. But despite that , Krish has the heart in the right place and willing to support and help who comes to him. Yes he cheated but that is nothing compared to what he made Meera do who has now slept with a bunch of men at this point , to be frank I don't think Meera will feel betrayed on seeing Krish having sex with someone. But Krish needs to get rid of Desai from his head.
I have a feeling Meera likes the alpha energy Desai brings which is what attracts her to him. But she is more of a fan of the beta Krish and she likes control which Krish willingly gives unlike Desai who manages to dominate. Which is what brings the confusion , she likes the alpha Desai that dominates her but she is not willing to let go the beta Krish that she can dominate.
Some how Desai must die. How people find erotism with the old man I do not understand. Rich, powerful old man sexual adventure with wife is not erotic, it is harsh, cruel and hard reality which we middle class people hate. This kind of theme we hate to read in erotic sites. Author Krish pls kill or murder desai by any how. You can write part 4 with the young aged character such as krish's teen age nephew or meera's teen age nephew, 25-27 year old bachelor neighbor, same aged meera's colleague. Author Krish pls kind enough to consider it. Pls don't include any old man anymore.