15-12-2024, 02:36 PM
Update - 5
Muskan ko Rinshu chode ja raha tha, uska lund pure raftar se andar-bahar ho raha tha. Kabhi Rinshu uske hoth chumm raha tha, kabhi unhe kaat raha tha, aur kabhi gale se laga raha tha. Muskan ek dafa charamseema tak pahunch chuki thi, aur uska pani usi ki chut mein malai ki tarah nikal raha tha.
Muskan abhi bhi albele halat mein thi jab Rinshu aage badh kar use kas ke pakad leta hai. Uska lund Muskan ke kokh ke jad tak tika hua tha. Rinshu pyar bhari nazar se Muskan ko dekhta hai aur dheere se bolta hai, "Muskan baby..."
"Ji..." Muskan siharate hue halki si awaaz mein jawab deti hai.
Rinshu uska hath pakad ke faila deta hai aur apne daant Muskan ke kandhe pe laga deta hai. Is se Muskan ki ek tez cheekh nikal jaati hai. Tabhi use mehsoos hota hai apne jad mein kuch garam-garam khaulta hua—jaise zamzam ka paani uske andar bhar raha ho.
Ye ehsaas Muskan ko sihara deta hai, aur wo apne pair peeche kar ke Rinshu ko jakad leti hai. Ek baar phir se, wo charamseema tak pahunch jaati hai. Lekin is baar uska dimaag kaam karna band kar deta hai, aur wo usi halat mein behosh ho jaati hai. Muskan apni zindagi mein pehli dafa santust hui thi—poori tarah charamseema tak pahunchi thi.
Rinshu bhi uske upar hi girta hai, uska pani Muskan ke kokh ko puri tarah se bhingo chuka tha.
Wo dono kuch der tak waise hi ek doosre mein lipte rahe. Phir dheere-dheere Muskan ki aankhein khulne lagi. Wo buri tarah se thak chuki thi. Badi mushkil se usne Rinshu ko apne upar se hataya.
Jab uski nazar Rinshu ke sikude hue auzaar par padi, jo abhi bhi bada hi dikh raha tha, to wo chaunk gayi.
Muskan uthne ki koshish karti hai, lekin dhadam se neeche gir jaati hai. Uski girne ki awaaz sunte hi Rinshu jag jaata hai.
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"...Kya madam ji, kahan chali?" Rinshu hanste hue Muskan ko chidhata hai. Muskan ki nazar ghadi pe jaati hai—pata chalta hai ki wo yahan kareeb 3 ghante se thi. Use darr lagne laga ki kahin uske in-laws ghar na aa gaye ho. Dheere se wo Rinshu se kehti hai, "Mujhe ghar chhod do," jo Rinshu turant maan leta hai.
Rinshu ko pata tha ki ye "dudh dene wali gaaye" ab uski ho chuki hai. Ye chara kahin aur charegi, gobar kahin aur karegi, lekin dudh ab sirf usi ko milega. Ye soch ke Rinshu muskara deta hai. Jaldi se apne kapde pehenta hai aur chalne ko kehta hai.
Muskan ki halat theek nahi thi—uske pair dard kar rahe the, kamar akadi hui thi, aur gardan par ek bada sa daant ka nishan tha. Badi mushkil se wo Rinshu ke peeche-peeche chal rahi thi. Jab wo kamre se bahar aayi, to dekha ki Rinshu bagal wale kamre ke ladke se baat kar raha tha. Muskan use dekh ke jhap si gayi.
Rinshu ne ishare se Muskan ko bulaya aur kaha, "Muskan, ye mera accha dost hai, isse milo."
Samne khada ladka Muskan ko ghur ke dekhte hue bola, "Bhabhi, aap chal nahi paa rahi hain acche se. Chot lag gayi kya?" Us harami ke chehre pe ek kamini muskaan thi.
Isi beech Rinshu bola, "Haan yaar, tere paas Zandu Balm hai kya? Jaldi de de, lugai ko laga dun to thoda aaram mile."
Dono hansne lage, aur Muskan muh niche karke zalil si mehsoos kar rahi thi. Wo dheere se Rinshu ke paas gayi aur kaan mein boli, "Chalo na ji, deri ho rahi hai na."
Rinshu has kar uska haath pakadta hai, apne dost ko alvida keh kar Muskan ke saath bike se nikalta hai, aur use uske ghar chhod aata hai. Muskan tab rahat ki saans leti hai jab ghar khaali milta hai.
Muskan andar jaake apni shakl aur halat sheeshe mein dekhne lagti hai. Jab uski nazar gardan pe padti hai, to ek bada sa daant ka nishan saaf-saaf dikh raha tha. Use dekh ke darr lagta hai, aur jaldi se dupatta leke apni gardan bandh leti hai. Lekin apne aashiq ke khayal se wo apne aap hi muskara deti hai. Uske dil mein pyar aur apnapan ka ehsaas umadne lagta hai.
Rinshu, Muskan ko "halal" karne ke baad, ek daaru ke theke pe jata hai. Ek mehngi brand ki chhoti botal uthata hai—aaj uske liye jasn ka din tha. Daaru ki botal ka dhakkan kholte hi wo seedha botal se peene lagta hai. Jaldi hi daaru ka nasha chadh jata hai, aur wo nashe ki halat mein apni bike leke kamre wapas jaane lagta hai.
Raste mein, nasha itna badh jata hai ki uska control chhut jata hai. Wo ek samne aati Maruti car se takra jata hai, aur wahin behosh ho jata hai.
Jab Rinshu ki aankhein khulti hain, to charo taraf safed roshni chubh rahi hoti hai. Use samajh aata hai ki wo hospital mein hai. Diwar pe lagi ghadi 2 baje ka waqt dikhati hai. Rinshu ghabra ke kisi ko pukarta hai. Ek nurse uske paas aati hai.
"Kya hua hai mujhe? Main kahan hoon?" Rinshu poochta hai.
Nurse use ghur ke dekhti hai aur kehti hai, "Zinda ho, isi ka shukriya karo. Ek hafte se coma mein the. Baal-baali bach gaye ho."
"Ek hafta?!" Rinshu pareshan ho kar puchta hai.
"Haan, ek hafta," nurse jawab deti hai.
Dara hua Rinshu agla sawal karta hai, "Mujhe kuch hoga to nahi?"
Nurse ek file dekhte hue bolti hai, "Nahi, recovery ho jayegi." Fir wo wahan se chali jaati hai.
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Rinshu lekin bahut bada kameena tha. Use ek moka mil gaya tha yeh jaanchne ka ki uski “gaay” kitni wafadaar hai. Jaldi se usne bistar ke bagal mein pada apna phone uthaya aur ek number milaya. Ek hi ghanti mein dusri taraf Muskan ne phone utha liya.
"Rinshu! Kahan the itne din? Kitna khoj rahi thi main tumhe! Kahan gayab ho gaye the?" Muskan ne bechaini se jaldi-jaldi poocha.
Rinshu ne thande lekin shaatir lehze mein apni baat kahi. Usne bataya ki kaise ek accident ke baad wo coma mein chala gaya tha aur abhi thodi der pehle hi hosh mein aaya hai. Muskan yeh sun kar dar gayi aur rone lagi.
"Rinshu... t-tumhare saath aisa ho gaya aur mujhe khabar bhi nahi!" Muskan ke shabdon mein chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Rinshu, andar hi andar Muskan ki is chinta se khush tha, lekin upar se sanjeeda bana raha. Usne Muskan se kaha ki wo aspatal aa jaye.
Kareeb 20 minute baad Muskan aspatal pahunchi aur Rinshu ke samne khadi thi. Rinshu bistar par baitha hua muskara raha tha. Muskan aage badhkar usse gale laga leti hai, aur uski aankhon se aansu chalak jaate hain. Rinshu bhi use kas ke pakad leta hai.
Us waqt dono ke beech ek ajib si shanti thi, jaise dono ek dusre ko apne dukh-sukh mein shamil kar rahe ho. Rinshu ne Muskan ko dekh kar kaha, "Mujhe yahan se jaldi chhuda lo."
Muskan, jo ab tak uski har baat maan chuki thi, kadi mehnat ke baad Rinshu ka discharge process complete karwati hai. Wo Rinshu ko uske kamre tak chhodne le jati hai. Uske padosi ki madad se usse bistar par lita deti hai, phir khane ka intezam karne lagti hai. Khana banane ke baad wo wahan se chali jaati hai, lekin yeh kissa yahin khatam nahi hota.
Agle din Muskan fir Rinshu ke kamre mein aayi. Is baar wo uska kamra saaf karne lagi. Rinshu usse dekh raha tha, lekin kuch bola nahi. Us din kamra chamak raha tha.
Doosre din, Muskan uske sare kapde dhoti hai, sukhati hai, aur sambhal kar almirah mein rakh deti hai. Teesre din wo uske kitchen ki halat sudharne lagti hai, taki agar Rinshu ko kuch banana ho, to sab kuch asaan rahe.
Rinshu ki seva Muskan bilkul ek aagyakaari biwi ki tarah kar rahi thi. Wo uske liye din raat lagatar kaam kar rahi thi, aur Rinshu ye sab dekh kar andar hi andar muskara raha tha. Uska "wafadaar gaay" ka idea sahi sabit ho raha tha.
Muskan ko Rinshu chode ja raha tha, uska lund pure raftar se andar-bahar ho raha tha. Kabhi Rinshu uske hoth chumm raha tha, kabhi unhe kaat raha tha, aur kabhi gale se laga raha tha. Muskan ek dafa charamseema tak pahunch chuki thi, aur uska pani usi ki chut mein malai ki tarah nikal raha tha.
Muskan abhi bhi albele halat mein thi jab Rinshu aage badh kar use kas ke pakad leta hai. Uska lund Muskan ke kokh ke jad tak tika hua tha. Rinshu pyar bhari nazar se Muskan ko dekhta hai aur dheere se bolta hai, "Muskan baby..."
"Ji..." Muskan siharate hue halki si awaaz mein jawab deti hai.
Rinshu uska hath pakad ke faila deta hai aur apne daant Muskan ke kandhe pe laga deta hai. Is se Muskan ki ek tez cheekh nikal jaati hai. Tabhi use mehsoos hota hai apne jad mein kuch garam-garam khaulta hua—jaise zamzam ka paani uske andar bhar raha ho.
Ye ehsaas Muskan ko sihara deta hai, aur wo apne pair peeche kar ke Rinshu ko jakad leti hai. Ek baar phir se, wo charamseema tak pahunch jaati hai. Lekin is baar uska dimaag kaam karna band kar deta hai, aur wo usi halat mein behosh ho jaati hai. Muskan apni zindagi mein pehli dafa santust hui thi—poori tarah charamseema tak pahunchi thi.
Rinshu bhi uske upar hi girta hai, uska pani Muskan ke kokh ko puri tarah se bhingo chuka tha.
Wo dono kuch der tak waise hi ek doosre mein lipte rahe. Phir dheere-dheere Muskan ki aankhein khulne lagi. Wo buri tarah se thak chuki thi. Badi mushkil se usne Rinshu ko apne upar se hataya.
Jab uski nazar Rinshu ke sikude hue auzaar par padi, jo abhi bhi bada hi dikh raha tha, to wo chaunk gayi.
Muskan uthne ki koshish karti hai, lekin dhadam se neeche gir jaati hai. Uski girne ki awaaz sunte hi Rinshu jag jaata hai.
---
"...Kya madam ji, kahan chali?" Rinshu hanste hue Muskan ko chidhata hai. Muskan ki nazar ghadi pe jaati hai—pata chalta hai ki wo yahan kareeb 3 ghante se thi. Use darr lagne laga ki kahin uske in-laws ghar na aa gaye ho. Dheere se wo Rinshu se kehti hai, "Mujhe ghar chhod do," jo Rinshu turant maan leta hai.
Rinshu ko pata tha ki ye "dudh dene wali gaaye" ab uski ho chuki hai. Ye chara kahin aur charegi, gobar kahin aur karegi, lekin dudh ab sirf usi ko milega. Ye soch ke Rinshu muskara deta hai. Jaldi se apne kapde pehenta hai aur chalne ko kehta hai.
Muskan ki halat theek nahi thi—uske pair dard kar rahe the, kamar akadi hui thi, aur gardan par ek bada sa daant ka nishan tha. Badi mushkil se wo Rinshu ke peeche-peeche chal rahi thi. Jab wo kamre se bahar aayi, to dekha ki Rinshu bagal wale kamre ke ladke se baat kar raha tha. Muskan use dekh ke jhap si gayi.
Rinshu ne ishare se Muskan ko bulaya aur kaha, "Muskan, ye mera accha dost hai, isse milo."
Samne khada ladka Muskan ko ghur ke dekhte hue bola, "Bhabhi, aap chal nahi paa rahi hain acche se. Chot lag gayi kya?" Us harami ke chehre pe ek kamini muskaan thi.
Isi beech Rinshu bola, "Haan yaar, tere paas Zandu Balm hai kya? Jaldi de de, lugai ko laga dun to thoda aaram mile."
Dono hansne lage, aur Muskan muh niche karke zalil si mehsoos kar rahi thi. Wo dheere se Rinshu ke paas gayi aur kaan mein boli, "Chalo na ji, deri ho rahi hai na."
Rinshu has kar uska haath pakadta hai, apne dost ko alvida keh kar Muskan ke saath bike se nikalta hai, aur use uske ghar chhod aata hai. Muskan tab rahat ki saans leti hai jab ghar khaali milta hai.
Muskan andar jaake apni shakl aur halat sheeshe mein dekhne lagti hai. Jab uski nazar gardan pe padti hai, to ek bada sa daant ka nishan saaf-saaf dikh raha tha. Use dekh ke darr lagta hai, aur jaldi se dupatta leke apni gardan bandh leti hai. Lekin apne aashiq ke khayal se wo apne aap hi muskara deti hai. Uske dil mein pyar aur apnapan ka ehsaas umadne lagta hai.
Rinshu, Muskan ko "halal" karne ke baad, ek daaru ke theke pe jata hai. Ek mehngi brand ki chhoti botal uthata hai—aaj uske liye jasn ka din tha. Daaru ki botal ka dhakkan kholte hi wo seedha botal se peene lagta hai. Jaldi hi daaru ka nasha chadh jata hai, aur wo nashe ki halat mein apni bike leke kamre wapas jaane lagta hai.
Raste mein, nasha itna badh jata hai ki uska control chhut jata hai. Wo ek samne aati Maruti car se takra jata hai, aur wahin behosh ho jata hai.
Jab Rinshu ki aankhein khulti hain, to charo taraf safed roshni chubh rahi hoti hai. Use samajh aata hai ki wo hospital mein hai. Diwar pe lagi ghadi 2 baje ka waqt dikhati hai. Rinshu ghabra ke kisi ko pukarta hai. Ek nurse uske paas aati hai.
"Kya hua hai mujhe? Main kahan hoon?" Rinshu poochta hai.
Nurse use ghur ke dekhti hai aur kehti hai, "Zinda ho, isi ka shukriya karo. Ek hafte se coma mein the. Baal-baali bach gaye ho."
"Ek hafta?!" Rinshu pareshan ho kar puchta hai.
"Haan, ek hafta," nurse jawab deti hai.
Dara hua Rinshu agla sawal karta hai, "Mujhe kuch hoga to nahi?"
Nurse ek file dekhte hue bolti hai, "Nahi, recovery ho jayegi." Fir wo wahan se chali jaati hai.
---
Rinshu lekin bahut bada kameena tha. Use ek moka mil gaya tha yeh jaanchne ka ki uski “gaay” kitni wafadaar hai. Jaldi se usne bistar ke bagal mein pada apna phone uthaya aur ek number milaya. Ek hi ghanti mein dusri taraf Muskan ne phone utha liya.
"Rinshu! Kahan the itne din? Kitna khoj rahi thi main tumhe! Kahan gayab ho gaye the?" Muskan ne bechaini se jaldi-jaldi poocha.
Rinshu ne thande lekin shaatir lehze mein apni baat kahi. Usne bataya ki kaise ek accident ke baad wo coma mein chala gaya tha aur abhi thodi der pehle hi hosh mein aaya hai. Muskan yeh sun kar dar gayi aur rone lagi.
"Rinshu... t-tumhare saath aisa ho gaya aur mujhe khabar bhi nahi!" Muskan ke shabdon mein chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Rinshu, andar hi andar Muskan ki is chinta se khush tha, lekin upar se sanjeeda bana raha. Usne Muskan se kaha ki wo aspatal aa jaye.
Kareeb 20 minute baad Muskan aspatal pahunchi aur Rinshu ke samne khadi thi. Rinshu bistar par baitha hua muskara raha tha. Muskan aage badhkar usse gale laga leti hai, aur uski aankhon se aansu chalak jaate hain. Rinshu bhi use kas ke pakad leta hai.
Us waqt dono ke beech ek ajib si shanti thi, jaise dono ek dusre ko apne dukh-sukh mein shamil kar rahe ho. Rinshu ne Muskan ko dekh kar kaha, "Mujhe yahan se jaldi chhuda lo."
Muskan, jo ab tak uski har baat maan chuki thi, kadi mehnat ke baad Rinshu ka discharge process complete karwati hai. Wo Rinshu ko uske kamre tak chhodne le jati hai. Uske padosi ki madad se usse bistar par lita deti hai, phir khane ka intezam karne lagti hai. Khana banane ke baad wo wahan se chali jaati hai, lekin yeh kissa yahin khatam nahi hota.
Agle din Muskan fir Rinshu ke kamre mein aayi. Is baar wo uska kamra saaf karne lagi. Rinshu usse dekh raha tha, lekin kuch bola nahi. Us din kamra chamak raha tha.
Doosre din, Muskan uske sare kapde dhoti hai, sukhati hai, aur sambhal kar almirah mein rakh deti hai. Teesre din wo uske kitchen ki halat sudharne lagti hai, taki agar Rinshu ko kuch banana ho, to sab kuch asaan rahe.
Rinshu ki seva Muskan bilkul ek aagyakaari biwi ki tarah kar rahi thi. Wo uske liye din raat lagatar kaam kar rahi thi, aur Rinshu ye sab dekh kar andar hi andar muskara raha tha. Uska "wafadaar gaay" ka idea sahi sabit ho raha tha.
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