14-12-2024, 05:56 PM
(09-12-2024, 11:27 PM)Desmond Miles Wrote:
Great going so far, bro..
Just an honest opinion, please don't mention Rajeev's age anywhere, and ignore the ones who comments about underage shit. As long as you don't mention the age, the story's fine.
By the way, after reading the last update, I thought Rajeev will still be witnessing more confusing scenerios rather than already knowing about what she actually inside that room. That mysterious way of storytelling is rare in this site these days. Hope you understand what I mean. Just leave the imagination job to the readers for a while, and then slowly uncover them one by one. Thats whole experience..
Anyway, you still can do that I hope. Since Mom or Suresh still dunno what Rajeev knows, so their hide and seek play can still go on smoothly!..
Waiting eagerly for the next update, bro.. Please continue as fast as you can.. <3
Thanks for the compliments, and yes, I will consider about the age thing. Secondly, I will further, Rajeev's (me) confusion on what is transpiring between Mom and Sir Suresh. I wish it could go how you wanted but I'm writing it from what I saw in reality but I can interpolate a few descriptions just to spice up the narration. Thanks and wait for the new update!

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