14-12-2024, 02:58 PM
(13-12-2024, 12:50 PM)Monjitaaah Wrote: It's a damn good story,the narration is next level, introduce some new characters like ruchita and kill her like her it will spice up the story,I think roma should be forced to commit crime while aroused and after lost everything she wanted to kill herself but trapped in her lust,the story should end like that n I want damn good criminal for your next story please
Only crime Roma can do is killing her son and mother in law in the fit of anger being a disturbance to her new found lust life.
