14-12-2024, 01:28 AM
Again congratulation to Krish.
Nice update very erotic , very well written .
( This is personal opinion )
I am so glad i did not feel anything about this story , the feeling is long gone lol . Now its feel like any other story with exceptionally well written.
47 Chapters full of Desai sex adventure lmao . Desai - 47 Krish -0
I just have one request If writer decided to turn Desai into hero of the story why not write more about desai too , Give his character more space his backgroud, past, like in the last update . The guy totally change , Meera change him , He is not some playboy any more . He is became family man who wants to have good life and family with women he loves and the women love him too.
It is evident that meera wants him too. Last update she literally gave walked over to krish , She did not even entertained krish not a little bit just went to bed lmao. This pathetic fellow Krish , Now he is just torturing meera . Krish is real villain here , He is manipulating Meera and making her feel guilty for the happiness she deserved and getting from Desai .
Krish is literally holding meera back she clearly loves desai , but Krish holding her kind of trophy does not want her to happy , gaslighting her into thinking seeking her happiness is selfish act . Just leave her for her own good . Misery loves Company . Krish is lost cause , pathetic , Mentally ill guy . He is making her life more miserable . Desai should fight and kick him and claim meera for her . Desai deserve her . Now I understand Why desai got major part in 47 chapters , Its Desai emerging as hero of the story kind of contrast to show how krish is anti hero here and every story is consider good only if hero wins .
Desai deserved to win , though i hate him as character , but the character arc of desai is very well written its almost convinced me ( i am not convinced because PART II , Portrayal of krish was very good thats why its hard for me belive that krish downfall in PART III is so pathetic ) but its fine now i see why desai got major part because he is gonna carry the story forward .
Meera and Desai will make lovely couple , They both love each other its just krish is getting between them . Hiding devices , wanking over the sound of meera getting ****** its not even erotic its just sad and pathetic i feel so pity on this guy . Krish is just disgusting.
I thought that setting meitrei with krish was good move , Desai get meera and Krish will get Meitrei , Kind of happy ending but i dont want meitrei to end up with this pathetic fellow .
The problem is there is not enough chapter or words are there that could turn the story in favour of Krish , So i accepted Krish's demise which is kind of true that is the ending a true cuckold deserve .
Meera and Desai not ending together will be a tragedy , They are great couple . There is nothing wrong ( though i hate it but its only logical )
And Fate of Krish :- I dont really care , Just kill him . I dont know why writer is dragging this story , just finish it already ( this is personal opinion people )
Its kind of becoming repetitive . Creating forced scenario where meera and desai meet and they fuck , confessed their love to each other but also not getting together , then krish wank off , Meera come baby i love you , Then again desai show fuck meera , krish wank , baby i love you , the cycle goes on on .
Just finish it and create a new story that would be very good move .
That's my two cents though its too much for Krish that guy dont even worth single penny . I wish desai beat the shit of Krish lmao.
( though i really request you please give something to Krish lmao please sir little justice wont be bad some relief moment for krish even worst enemy shows mercy at some point please show some mercy on our pathetic loser boy Krish lol ( pun intended )
Krish se Meera aur Desai ki shadi me bartan jarur dulwana lol .
AND CONGRATULATIONS ON THE CROSSING 200 PAGES MILESTONE , I WISH THERE WAS SOME WAY TO SHOW OUR APPRECIATION SOME KIND OF REWARD OR GIFT TO YOU ONE OF THE GREAT WRITER KRISH HIMSELF .
Nice update very erotic , very well written .
( This is personal opinion )
I am so glad i did not feel anything about this story , the feeling is long gone lol . Now its feel like any other story with exceptionally well written.
47 Chapters full of Desai sex adventure lmao . Desai - 47 Krish -0
I just have one request If writer decided to turn Desai into hero of the story why not write more about desai too , Give his character more space his backgroud, past, like in the last update . The guy totally change , Meera change him , He is not some playboy any more . He is became family man who wants to have good life and family with women he loves and the women love him too.
It is evident that meera wants him too. Last update she literally gave walked over to krish , She did not even entertained krish not a little bit just went to bed lmao. This pathetic fellow Krish , Now he is just torturing meera . Krish is real villain here , He is manipulating Meera and making her feel guilty for the happiness she deserved and getting from Desai .
Krish is literally holding meera back she clearly loves desai , but Krish holding her kind of trophy does not want her to happy , gaslighting her into thinking seeking her happiness is selfish act . Just leave her for her own good . Misery loves Company . Krish is lost cause , pathetic , Mentally ill guy . He is making her life more miserable . Desai should fight and kick him and claim meera for her . Desai deserve her . Now I understand Why desai got major part in 47 chapters , Its Desai emerging as hero of the story kind of contrast to show how krish is anti hero here and every story is consider good only if hero wins .
Desai deserved to win , though i hate him as character , but the character arc of desai is very well written its almost convinced me ( i am not convinced because PART II , Portrayal of krish was very good thats why its hard for me belive that krish downfall in PART III is so pathetic ) but its fine now i see why desai got major part because he is gonna carry the story forward .
Meera and Desai will make lovely couple , They both love each other its just krish is getting between them . Hiding devices , wanking over the sound of meera getting ****** its not even erotic its just sad and pathetic i feel so pity on this guy . Krish is just disgusting.
I thought that setting meitrei with krish was good move , Desai get meera and Krish will get Meitrei , Kind of happy ending but i dont want meitrei to end up with this pathetic fellow .
The problem is there is not enough chapter or words are there that could turn the story in favour of Krish , So i accepted Krish's demise which is kind of true that is the ending a true cuckold deserve .
Meera and Desai not ending together will be a tragedy , They are great couple . There is nothing wrong ( though i hate it but its only logical )
And Fate of Krish :- I dont really care , Just kill him . I dont know why writer is dragging this story , just finish it already ( this is personal opinion people )
Its kind of becoming repetitive . Creating forced scenario where meera and desai meet and they fuck , confessed their love to each other but also not getting together , then krish wank off , Meera come baby i love you , Then again desai show fuck meera , krish wank , baby i love you , the cycle goes on on .
Just finish it and create a new story that would be very good move .
That's my two cents though its too much for Krish that guy dont even worth single penny . I wish desai beat the shit of Krish lmao.
( though i really request you please give something to Krish lmao please sir little justice wont be bad some relief moment for krish even worst enemy shows mercy at some point please show some mercy on our pathetic loser boy Krish lol ( pun intended )
Krish se Meera aur Desai ki shadi me bartan jarur dulwana lol .
AND CONGRATULATIONS ON THE CROSSING 200 PAGES MILESTONE , I WISH THERE WAS SOME WAY TO SHOW OUR APPRECIATION SOME KIND OF REWARD OR GIFT TO YOU ONE OF THE GREAT WRITER KRISH HIMSELF .
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