Romance An Old Debt has to be Paid..by salir

[Salir]

Hot update and everything is going great, but I do have a small—well, more like the tiniest—complaint. Sir, Why is there an unnecessary space or gap in the middle of the sentence? 
For example:
"He watched with his mouth hanging open as she crawled up on the bed, instinctively

raising up his left arm as she curled up next to him."
( there are many such sentences)
And I'm not saying this in reference to this scene

Sometimes, these gaps interrupt the natural flow of the sentence. While both are the one sentence, the gap makes them feel different when reading.  
Just to be clear, I’m not criticizing your work—this is more of a small observation.

To be honest, I still can't find a suitable arrangement for the spacing between sentences and lines.

Personally, I don't like the automatically planned spacing in this portal because it's too narrow and I would like
to leave a little more space between the sentences that show dialogues/activities of different characters, 
but it's not that easy to find an optimal solution.

In any case, this time I tried to work without large spacing and would like to know your opinion.

Thank you for your attention and comment.

have a nice time...
Salir