Romance An Old Debt has to be Paid..by salir

[Bakchod Londa]

Hot update and everything is going great, but I do have a small—well, more like the tiniest—complaint. Sir, Why is there an unnecessary space or gap in the middle of the sentence? 
For example:
"He watched with his mouth hanging open as she crawled up on the bed, instinctively

raising up his left arm as she curled up next to him."
( there are many such sentences)
And I'm not saying this in reference to this scene

Sometimes, these gaps interrupt the natural flow of the sentence. While both are the one sentence, the gap makes them feel different when reading.  
Just to be clear, I’m not criticizing your work—this is more of a small observation.