09-12-2024, 11:18 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-12-2024, 11:25 PM by xossissippi. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
First of all I would like to say after reading the previous update... Everything that happened between Krish and Meera felt so wrong, and also so damn Erotic!! Maybe that is why you are the master erotic writer. What kind of sick kinks are you infecting our brains with krish999?? LOL. I really did enjoy the previous update ! It was very very twisted especially in terms of the mental gymnastics each of the characters are playing... all Meera needed was not a push, not even a nudge, just a tiny little touch from the little finger of Krish to completely abandon her standing and just jump to the proposition that, it is ok to go to Desai's room. Damn she really that horny! or is there something else to it? Finally as per the title of the story, Krish is really beginning to 'Know his wife' and 'Know himself'.
I especially liked the last stroke of brush when the recording 'freezed' at the last moment. I felt man... Krish has suffered enough let him catch a break, LOL hopefully the poor guy's recording 'unfreezes', this is too much heart palpitations for a reader!
I feel it is too soon to predict what could happen next as the 'arena' has leveled up! As lollobionda has mentioned about the rivers and deltas, yeah i also feel it could be many branches! But somewhere I feel, this time nobody is coming to save Meera from Desai, not even Krish! This time it is Meera who has to walk the walk and save herself. It is Meera who has see the truth beyond the illusion that is Desai. Would she be able to do it and return back to Krish? or be lost in the illusion called Desai... forever? Would she end up as another conquest for Desai? another 'check mark' in the book of checklists of Desai before he moves on to the next conquest.
I absolutely loved your ideas! I also feel Krish is definitely not a weak character. He is self made and has a charm of his own. He is nonchalant in his approach towards problems in his life and has faced challenges head on! But as RCF mentioned I also immediately felt his only problem is his 'cuckoldness', the only thing that's holding him back from achieving in terms of what other people presume to be a successful person. The only way he could completely change his persona is if something terrible has happened in his life like he lost Meera for good this time or if the couple came out stronger together from Desai's death grip! Plus I feel he's not seeking any materialistic success like Desai, his only search and reward is to explore newest and the most sickest ways to find ultimate sexual pleasure through cuckolding... no matter the cost!
On the side note yes, I do like to see a new character that could swoop in to save Meera! or at the least provide distraction from the Desai's mental onslaught and provide some sort of relief to the couple ( which I know may not be where the story is headed)
My personal choices are Piyush and the other is the tharki old buddha (lecherous old man) Narender uncle who had the courage to dirty talk Meera and invite her for 'workout session' in the store room. Both are undeserving ( like Shekar ) and been longing for a shot with a lioness called Meera.
I especially liked the last stroke of brush when the recording 'freezed' at the last moment. I felt man... Krish has suffered enough let him catch a break, LOL hopefully the poor guy's recording 'unfreezes', this is too much heart palpitations for a reader!
I feel it is too soon to predict what could happen next as the 'arena' has leveled up! As lollobionda has mentioned about the rivers and deltas, yeah i also feel it could be many branches! But somewhere I feel, this time nobody is coming to save Meera from Desai, not even Krish! This time it is Meera who has to walk the walk and save herself. It is Meera who has see the truth beyond the illusion that is Desai. Would she be able to do it and return back to Krish? or be lost in the illusion called Desai... forever? Would she end up as another conquest for Desai? another 'check mark' in the book of checklists of Desai before he moves on to the next conquest.
(04-12-2024, 11:29 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I feel like I've seen enough of the Krish that is so repressive. I get it that the author wants Krish as the ideal Beta since he has that Beta qualities. But I want Krish to have an identity of his own rather than be Meera's flamboyant shadow. It would be cool if you introduce new characters that could elevate and evolve Krish than his usual self. I want him to be a made man , a best candidate would be Meera's former boss who used to like and respect Krish and have him become like a guiding force in leading Krish to an elevated scenario of responsibilities and discipline. There is a reason Krish is unique than the usual cuckold stories and I want this story to end in a high note for Krish. Whether Meera stays with him or leaves him for Desai , I want Krish to have an uplifting ending in this story. It should end with Krish becoming successful , that would bring closure and satisfaction to Krish as a person who despite all of his messy life , finally finds his path and lives a life of completion and relief and ends the story in a high standard for him.
(07-12-2024, 05:48 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: As a fan I would like to propose an idea the author can explore.
What if Vicky Security Services evolves into a Private Military Corporation in the future? I know it sounds stupid but hear me out. This is just my take of one aspect of the story for the future.
In the future a new client is introduced that hires VSS (Vicky Security Services) for a job , this client can be a retired military man who sees the potential of growth and dedication in Krish and decides to give him a helping hand which results in VSS to slowly grow in Private Security Sector to the point VSS no longer is about armed guards , but also manufacture of security measures like electric fences , safes , bank vaults , trap doors etc. Basically VSS evolves into an enterprise that invests in anything and everything regarding security. And have this new character bring some real change in Krish that will help him evolve and focus on bigger achievements in life , a life where he is commited to efficiency and discipline. Have Ashish , Meera's old boos return and become a support to Krish as he likes Krish's personality. Then have Piyush too become Krish's hype man. This idea has been in my head for a while because this would actually make Krish evolve as a character and end the story on a high note for him. I know this might be just an afterthought but I am only sharing what I think would be a great way to end the Krish story regardless the ending. With or without Meeera , this would be an apt ending to his story where he becomes a successful man.
I only state this simply because I like the character of Krish in this story series because he is a very unique take on themes like cuckolding. So I believe a character like him shouldn't end like those cliche cuckold ending. I want his character to end with an improvement and a better development to him.
I absolutely loved your ideas! I also feel Krish is definitely not a weak character. He is self made and has a charm of his own. He is nonchalant in his approach towards problems in his life and has faced challenges head on! But as RCF mentioned I also immediately felt his only problem is his 'cuckoldness', the only thing that's holding him back from achieving in terms of what other people presume to be a successful person. The only way he could completely change his persona is if something terrible has happened in his life like he lost Meera for good this time or if the couple came out stronger together from Desai's death grip! Plus I feel he's not seeking any materialistic success like Desai, his only search and reward is to explore newest and the most sickest ways to find ultimate sexual pleasure through cuckolding... no matter the cost!
On the side note yes, I do like to see a new character that could swoop in to save Meera! or at the least provide distraction from the Desai's mental onslaught and provide some sort of relief to the couple ( which I know may not be where the story is headed)
My personal choices are Piyush and the other is the tharki old buddha (lecherous old man) Narender uncle who had the courage to dirty talk Meera and invite her for 'workout session' in the store room. Both are undeserving ( like Shekar ) and been longing for a shot with a lioness called Meera.