09-12-2024, 09:32 AM
(09-12-2024, 07:55 AM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I understand that , yes there is some improvement but I feel there needs to be a bigger push in his development. And I believe a change in focus in Krish's life would bring that change in him. But then again the Author did state " There is no ex-cuckold " so I know that kind of development won't happen.
But then again I prefer a small underdog story in there to be built for Krish to have a better ending for him. In a way I want him to turn VSS (Vicky Security Service) to turn into his personal business empire that will boost the confidence and change in ambitions in him. Maybe that will also stop him to have his life revolve around Meera , to show her and everyone that Krish is a made man. Despite the setbacks in work life and in the bedroom , he still pushes forward and climbs new heights which makes Meera to be proud of him as a person. I feel a perfect ending to this story is not just about Meera and Krish's love overcoming all the problems , but them evolving as individuals as well. Meera has gone through enough of that , its Krish that needs some direction and a change of ambition in his life. I don't want him to be a watered down version of Atul from his other story "No One Dies A Saint" , I want him to have the taste of success and fame in his own right. Because I believe a success story will build him the confidence and maturity to see life differently and maybe learn to make decisions that are right and devoid of Meera's influence. That way they can learn to love each other more since they like this change and live happy
That's the point I wanted to emphasize, Meera choosing Krish now makes more sense than him becoming more successful or different. She has to realize that even though she misses Desai and struggling to forget time spent with him, she still can think about it because her center of universe is still intact in the form of Krish. The day she loses it she will realize that Desai is a mirage and nothing more and that needs to happen when nothing changes in Krish status or stand. If Meera chooses Krish because his focus is elsewhere or if he becomes more successful then it can portray as her love is not true.
Anyways lets see how story develops.
~RCF