Romance An Old Debt has to be Paid..by salir
(08-12-2024, 11:27 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: A tingling eroticism with a high entertainment value, excellently written and staged within reach...


Even though I realise that this is not a fantasy story, but rather a mixture of autobiography and reports of 
experiences embellished with a little fantasy ... I was very surprised by Nadir's plot.

I would have been more understanding (and in my opinion it would have been the right way to go) if Nadir 
- after bringing Jalal into the house, informing Meena and announcing Jalal's visit - had said goodbye to 
him on the grounds that he still had something to do at the hospital... just as he had intended to do when 
he went to the car.

Now he has to live with the negative label of ‘cuckold’ and sexual failure - if Jalal takes this to the extreme 
and keeps telling Nadir this in the future -.

If he had left, the impression would have been created that Jalal's sexual intercourse with Meena in their 
marriage bed took place without his knowledge or involvement.

He would be in a better position without having diminished or even lost the reputation and respect that 
Jalal had shown him up to that point.

But only Nadir himself knows why he acted the way he did ...


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

It has to be told as it was, my friend...

Well, you can't reconcile my actions, or rather Nadir's actions, with rational thinking or normal behavior of a (normal) man in our society..

But what he thought and decided on that particular day...
He knew or thought that he was in a position of control, the topic that had always preoccupied him and that had also irritated him as much as the last days before...

He didn't want to be portrayed - especially for Jalal as his love rival - as a cheating husband who lost his wife and love to him, to Jalal., or whom Jalal could conquer his wife without his knowledge...

He wanted to tel and show him...:
"I know what you want and know you try to have my wife, you couldn't have her because of me. Now I decide whether you can, I allow you to have her but I can stop you any moment it if I want."
And with that, he achieved his goal in both directions. His selfish pride  about control and, more importantly, his inclination.

Enjoy,
Salir
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RE: An Old Dep has to be Paid - by Lollobionda - 09-12-2019, 11:23 PM
RE: An Old Dep has to be Paid - by Lollobionda - 09-12-2019, 11:47 PM
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