Adultery என்னால் தாம் எல்லாம் என்னை மன்னிச்சிடு அம்மா

[Haroldfkumar2]

I'm sorry Mr. Gumshot
Personally I don't feel the usual touch u used to have in the older updates in this one. The story is progressing, but it's not getting the kind of feel which I had experienced in your earlier updates.

The dungeon part is given in this story but when Sangeetha had talked about this dungeon over the phone and Sanjay over hear it, if you had made Sangeetha tell Sanjay what those two had done to her in that dungeon and made Sanjay wonder what more those two will do to her along with Velu mani wouldade the story even interesting and engaging.

Still those 15 days is a unknown story. You could have made the second estate visit after she had explained what happened in those 2 weeks to Sanjay and when Sanjay decided to get the idea to actually see Sangeetha in action and arranged the estate visit would have made this story even better.

After when she came back from the estate and went backt to their house overnight and fuck those two is still needed explain. U could have just made her think herself what had happened in their house with those two boys and curse and be proud of herself like you used to do in ur earlier updates.

After the 2 week stay the boys went back to a herbal shop to rejuvenate their sexual energy and u told that shop is known to the OG Kumar. Still there is no explanation regarding this.

I'm telling just my views on this story cause this is one of the stories which had made so engaged in thinking women too have desires and when it crosses the limit no one can stop it.

So pls take care in story writing.

U too have a life and u had started a wonderful story pls make it it end properlywith proper justice to all characters not just forced sex and rushed up plot. If you haven't made to the plot pls don't make it rushed.

Again I'm saying these are only my views on this story. This is ur story and u have the right to make it however u want but pls take care in that story cause this story had made lot of people happy. Let it end the way it deserved to be.....

Thankyou