01-12-2024, 02:32 PM
Muthu and Praveen's arc is an absolute masterpiece! The chemistry between them is so intense and well-written. The buildup was slow, seductive, and gripping—exactly how it should be in an erotic story. The professor’s arc, too, brought a different kind of thrill with its sensual vibe. Arun’s arc feels a bit rushed compared to these two, but it has potential to grow if slowed down slightly.
Great work. Keep updating.
Great work. Keep updating.