01-12-2024, 11:46 AM
(27-11-2024, 08:14 PM)Mutthal07 Wrote: Friend, m a big fan of this story.. , but Honestly this type of pov is destroying it.. i was smelling her hair , i am feeling her ass blah blah ,
Just keep it in narrators pov. Its Far more erotic that way
I’ll consider this point in future, because I have already written few episodes in this way. I’ll change the course over the time.