[RCF]

Only suggestion 

Sex duration should be long we should feel Whenever someone wants to have sex with Shipra then first of all he should arrange it like Patode did otherwise it will not be fun in the story and if someone will have sex by blackmailing then it will become a very bad story

I want that when having sex with Sipra, you should describe every part of her body in detail. We want to feel that thrill through your story. During sex time, take time and give a big update. Whatever update you give in the story, on any issue, when during sex you update more and take care of the details. Focus on every part of the body and tell us what is going on in which part. Make us feel it. A dirty man with a beautiful girl cannot get such a body, and if he got it, then how much he will love her body.

Agreed the story or the description during sex is focusing more on Patode humiliating Shipra and her husband than their actual feelings and Patode's feelings on trumping Shipra for first time. I was disappointed with that update and it's dominance of Patode's cocky nature and it did get in the way for you to enjoy their first time. Felt it should have been a more passionate episode between them which would have made the first time truly special.