28-11-2024, 10:20 AM
(This post was last modified: 28-11-2024, 11:16 AM by ShaziaMirza. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
I've been enjoying your captivating story, particularly the assertive role of the female protagonist.
However, I noticed an inconsistency in the description of traditional Indian attire in the recent updates. A dupatta is not a shawl, it is a scarf-like garment worn with traditional outfits like the salwar-suit or churidar-suit. The kameez is the tunic in a salwar-suit, while the trousers are the salwar. In a churidar-suit, the churidars are the tight-fitting pants that distinguish it from the salwar-suit.
For clarity, a salwar-suit is composed of a kameez (tunic) and salwar (trousers), and a churidar-suit features a kameez with churidars (tighter trousers). Using the correct terminology will enhance the authenticity of your story for readers familiar with these garments.
Thank you for considering this feedback, and I look forward to the next part of your intriguing narrative. Keep up the good work!
However, I noticed an inconsistency in the description of traditional Indian attire in the recent updates. A dupatta is not a shawl, it is a scarf-like garment worn with traditional outfits like the salwar-suit or churidar-suit. The kameez is the tunic in a salwar-suit, while the trousers are the salwar. In a churidar-suit, the churidars are the tight-fitting pants that distinguish it from the salwar-suit.
For clarity, a salwar-suit is composed of a kameez (tunic) and salwar (trousers), and a churidar-suit features a kameez with churidars (tighter trousers). Using the correct terminology will enhance the authenticity of your story for readers familiar with these garments.
Thank you for considering this feedback, and I look forward to the next part of your intriguing narrative. Keep up the good work!