21-11-2024, 11:00 AM
(17-11-2024, 09:48 AM)Mintu08 Wrote: This is undoubtedly an Excellent constructive criticism for sure! I am very happy to see my readers very involved in the story. But like I had mentioned earlier, the story is likely to be darker further and accordingly the reader has to take a decision of reading or not.
Anyways, as an author I am entitled to my own plans. If you enjoy dark twisted erotica, please be with the story further. Be tuned for next week!
In sex / erotic stories DARK means related to kinks. It can be hardcore, different fantasies.
by what sense DARK means brutality, killing, gang RP?
In the name of constructive criticism you are ignoring the shit you are spreading. Don't glorify gang RP. Dont display your mental sickness here. Be dark in sexual activities not by showing gang RPs.