19-11-2024, 11:55 AM
(18-11-2024, 01:20 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: hi bro loved your direct narration style.
the story started and moving in fast pace wiht more people getting added
try to bring all characters around Padma, as she is the main characer
the title also is about Padma
maybe write what adventures happens in the competition
how reddy brings a 3some with other woman
Ty.
The story will be around Padma only, once the competition starts and also will try to rush the other characters scenes.