16-11-2024, 10:01 PM
Man you just started with a banger. Always the opening part of any story determines what the writer is going to offer and how he holds the readers. Despite very little mistakes, the opening part definitely appealed me. You can mention the age of shilpa and add some kinks and importantly tasting the delicious asshole of her huge ass, because swaying buttocks are always a defining feature of milfs. I am expecting the story to progress upto the end without stopping in middle. I am expecting something kinky in lines of stories like "My agent mom" by devteen.