[suryaspk]

Dear Suraj76626, big fan of your writing!

First of all, a big thank you for your dedication and continuous timely updates to the story. Truly commend worthy. I know you've worked so hard and have created this wonderful story and the passion I can feel it in your writing. You have outdone yourself!

After reading the previous update I must say I have some strong critiques -

I too had similar kind of thoughts. But we have to accept it's erotica a sex story. 
Shipra seems to be smart one but the moment she made the agreement sex became inevitable. It's a slipper slope, two people can't engage in oral sex and expect to maintain boundary for so long. At the end she too has needs.

And think which is better ordeal whether Shipra gets out of this with dignity or she trusts Patode, betrayed then gets out of it(I hope she gets out of this).

And patode is playing dangerous game, let's see how long he can manipulate both parties.

I still have hope on author he can still deliver something good.