12-11-2024, 08:44 AM
(11-11-2024, 05:17 PM)seansean007 Wrote: This story is not about Hariya, but about Anita and her adventures.
I really love the fact that the clarity Sean has regarding Anita's character and how he wants to lead the story. This is one of the few stories where the writer is sticking to his plot no matter what the readers say and also have some logical explanation as to why certain demands from the readers can't be met.
Sean you are a great writer and I am sorry that I wasn't able to read the changes you have made in the previous updates but what I can understand from the recent updates is that now Ramu is Chanda's father which brings a new arch in the story where anything Anita does with Ramu, she needs to make sure that Chanda never finds out about it. Also, since you have very well mentioned that the story is about Anita and I also expect this story about Anita only with multiple multiple male characters. This brings me to my next point, that now since Anita's character has moved up a notch and also Hariya is injured this gives the opportunity for other characters to flourish and Hariya's character can take a back seat for few days. Like the golgappa guy, his character is a bit shy and enjoys whatever show Anita puts up for him, this duration of the story can be used to make him more comfortable around Anita like one day when he comes to sell golgappas to Anita it starts raining and since Anita is craving for golgappas she can ask him to come inside so that he doesn't get wet and also feed her golgappas.
I like how Ramu's character is getting attention now, but there are other characters as well who would love some attention from Anita like those autowalas or that old man in that gali in market who was masturbating while looking at Anita and Hariya.
As a reader, I understand why everyone wants to push Hariya's character because they think he is very close to fucking Anita and engaging some other characters with Anita means delaying the sex part in the story and most of us are here just for that but whatever I have known about you, I can guarantee that Anita getting fucked would only happen when you would want and considering your busy life Hariya fucking Anita is not going to happen anytime soon but atleast developing other characters in the story would bring some spice. Only request is that every character that Anita engages with should have something unique about them whereas the common denominator among them being that they are all lower class people and the lust they have for Anita.
Anyways Sean great story, you are a gem of a writer and the speed with which these last few updates were posted and how they have taken the story ahead is commendable and would expect the same in the future as well with more frequent updates.
Take care dude.