11-11-2024, 11:20 PM
(11-11-2024, 11:04 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: So many updates are there in a single day, sean bro has completed half years task in one day, what a great celebrating day, and surprise for readers, sean bro don't b disappointed bcz readers are not responding. Story has got in very speed so everyone is busy reading and comprehending the eroticism that has been spurred with new updates, thank you so much for this much momentum and giving the much needed decisiveness to the plot, now the story will gain speed and will reach to the point where you can even update in anytime when free, bcz reader who wanted to read the action have got their much awaited due, cheers....they will respond in coming time when they'll be able to come out of digesting the enormous level of erotic sense which has begun today. Anita's boldness in last two updates has increased and she is way more open now, comparing to old story's anita she is much ahead. SPIT MASSAGE was most erotic part of all 4 updates and waiting to see it in hospital again....only one suggestion, try to describe the male private parts of hariya and other characters also, that will increase the quality of detailing, your style is unique in a way that it sometimes overexplains the background parts and plot settings but keeping in mind that it is an erotic sex story so private of body parts of male and female should be the priority of explanation and description...take it as a suggestion. And plz do add this in your writing style, that will make is more that perfect novella epic of erotica. There are some stories which are nowhere near to erotica but due to description of male and female private parts with actions detailing, those stories have became cult in erotic adultery stories. So plz do that, don't left these necessary things on writers imagination....you have so high calibre of writing that readers often forget to imagine in their mind bcz your writing style is so good that you create an running movie in words. This picturization of words is and imagination itself. Do consider these things and as always we miss jeetu so much...hope he comes in next part as plumber. RAMU seems stranger in this story hariya jeetu and others are good. Anita should also try new boys as well middle ages to older ones. She should be tested by all kind of men. ...thanx again.... waiting for next
Male Private Part Over Mat Bataye ga Please Aur Rahi Bat Ramu And Jeetu ki Wo Sean Dekh Lega Kyu ki Anita Randi Nahi Hai Abhi Usko Hariya Pe Chod Do