10-11-2024, 02:05 PM
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For the first time I felt like no interest in writing comments anymore on this story. As one of the reader friend said..I do not recognize these characters too. They are like zombies and devoid of any love for each other but just show a facade that is repulsive to read.
I am not sure at this point what Krish_999 is trying to say in this story, We asked for rewriting chapters to fill in the gaps and we are getting more gaps and more questions unanswered and also feel at this point the agenda is more to write something unexpected than staying true to the story. No one expected Meera not to realize that Krish is not at home and its dumb esp after Maithrei saying Krish called her from home and Meera is more smart than that and yet we read unexpected outcome, We expected a fight so that was nullified and no one expected cheating from Krish before break up and we got it.
Maybe it was a mistake to even request anything on the story. We should have just let this story go with unanswered questions rather than lose the connect with the characters.
Two questions that were left and were not even raised at all and I feel are more important
1. Krish was supposed to ask her if he was not at home, would she confess to him or not? I wanted to see what Meera would have told him as she agreed to Desai she would hide it. Or even better Krish might say that he heard last few sentences that she agreed to hide it and he could ask her why? Why would she hide it and betray him like that, this question is important because Meera always confesses because she always feels remorse after the effect is gone and out of her self consciousness always confesses unlike Krish.
2. Meera was supposed to ask Krish, why he lost appetite to watch them both and what truly changed him..or if he was truly changed or if he jerked outside the door? Though was feeling guilty its important to ask because she needs to know if he changed or not. We know he didn't change but Meera doesn't know it so a genuine question was important to lay out a fact that Krish is lying and proof will be revealed in future.
Reading Krish POV is biggest torture in this story. Knowing his flaws and pulling your hair for his mistakes has become a routine. I have not seen or read a more pathetic protagonist anywhere in any story so far. He just got into a position where he can drive his life back to the past where both the couple loved each other and yet he managed to screw it with Maithrei and this guy has no morals and righteousness to even confess it to Meera. He has hidden the truth about where he was during their love making and now he cheated on her and managed to hide it, but truth always has a way of finding its own path to light. He did not doubt for a sec that Maithrei might betray him with Desai nor He thought about his recorder in second bedroom which will reveal to Meera that he has not slept in that bedroom that night.
Is Krish_999 trying to solve the unknowns in previous ending or Is he writing different ending? If it was new ending then he could say it here so few set of people like me could bid adieu to this story. As I do not care about different ending and if it was same ending then what's going on right now will make it more harder to believe in a fact that these two really love each other at all or not. Will give few reasons why I think this story has strayed so much from its path.
Meera: Lies and Deceit
1. “I too had moved on, Krish,” Meera said.
Really, she lied to Krish on his face, If she really moved on then why the desperation when she sees Desai and why so much longing when he kisses her. She claims she loves Krish more than anything but lies on his face. I still believe what she has for Krish is Love and what she has for Desai is lust and intimacy that comes with pure lust, but why lie to Krish and herself. She is clinging to this marriage despite knowing that her heart is here with Krish but her mind is trapped with Desai and his memories.
2. “No.” I said. “Because I felt you deserved some action. I haven’t been giving you the best version of me, recently.”
Meera was stunned to hear me say that.
“No, Krish. There’s nothing like that. It happened because of the opportunity… I mean, I would call it greed for more. Or my weakness. Not because I didn’t love you, or didn’t love being with you.”
There is nothing related to Love here, Why can't she open up about what they are going through, even though both know it. She is feeling that passion that is missed from Krish and only found with Desai and though both are trying desperately they are not discussing it. They have not been connected with each other despite being in this marriage so to work on it they need to open about it, and when will they do that and this lack of communication has been dragged so much in this story that at this point this seems like saas bhi kabhi bahu thi serial episode 350.
3. “There’s no need to compare, Krish. Please.”
Really? Then why did you agree to Desai that how does he knew that she is not getting it? Is she multiple split personality? On one end she agrees with Desai that she failed to reconcile with Krish and also agrees that Krish is failing in bed and when she is with Krish she says not to compare with him? Is she trying to protect Krish from the fact that he is failing and it will impact him more if he knew he is no match for Desai? If yes then how did she think he will improve and also add the fact that she cannot fake her orgasm or not get one for ever..that's no way to live in a marriage. So irrespective of whether she is protecting him or herself or her marriage..its bound to fail as eventually this no satisfaction will catch up to them..instead of openly discussing the problem she is concealing it with sweet talk.
4. “At first, after we got back together, I was enthusiastic. I thought I could make it work with Sundeep. But every time I was alone… I found myself thinking about Desai. No matter what Sundeep and I did, it just wasn’t the same.”
It was clear from Nidhi's angle on how exactly Meera must be feeling right now, Author gave this as a perspective for us to understand Meera with out her pov. So if this is true then what is Meera doing to overcome this issue? Instead of fighting it she gave in to Desai. She doesn't have a choice to leave Krish as Nidhi does because unlike Nidhi , Meera loves Krish. so what is the solution..Does it has to go on and on until she couldn't take it anymore and run to Desai? Will she become a slut and pet of Desai and die with guilt of not able to control it over the time? Or will she settle down for Desai's dick than Krish's love?
5. . “It’s not that important to me, Krish. I’m happy with what we have. What you give me is more than enough. I feel loved and cherished.”
Meera has become dumb in this part. She is in denial. If you were happy with what you have then you would never succumb to Desai. You would never try to move on from him and fail.
"It was like he was struggling to move on, just as much as I was.""
What kind of writing is this from Author, there is no clarity for characters. They tell they are desperate in one paragraph and trying to move on in one paragraph and the very next paragraph she says
“It’s not that important to me, Krish. I’m happy with what we have. What you give me is more than enough. I feel loved and cherished.” I am not sure in same episode a person can feel both with out much change unless Meera knows that later is a lie and she is trying to gaslight Krish.
Krish: Low confidence and zero moral conscience, add self destruction to it.
1. Why hide from Meera if he really thinks by hiding in the shelf he now knows how Meera feels with Desai? Its his true chance to make Meera confess her feelings, and yet he chose to run away.
2. “Don’t be,” I said. “Because guilt will only make you lose your grip. If you don’t want Desai to come back, then you need to find a way to forget him. If you truly want to move on, maybe it’s time to find someone new. Someone who’ll make it feel like a fresh start.”
On one hand you give solid advice to Nidhi to forget Desai and she has to find a way. On the other hand you knew Meera is in same situation and yet you are doing nothing to help her. Instead of helping a person who is drug addicted , you are getting yourself one dose from Maithrei. He is hell bent on screwing his marriage, No one in his sane mind will fuck Maithrei at this moment.
3. "Desai had etched himself deeply into the memories of every woman around me. Nidhi. Meera. Ananya."
Whose fault is this and why is Krish naive to question himself why every women around him is coming from Desai's bed in the past? He brought this on Nidhi ,Meera and failed to save Ananya. He is the one to blame for every women's loneliness right now.
4. Meera fucks Desai and she forgets about Krish. Krish fucks Maithrei and forgets about Meera. What kind of marriage is this one? And then they boast dialogues like I can't live with out you and do not want to lose you. On My god I am tired of these sentences. Never ending shower of love while actions show they both crave others. At least I can empathize with Meera considering all women who got same treatment from Desai are going through same phase. What is the excuse for Krish? Maithrei is not Desai's girl. Nidhi is not Desai's girl. Fucking them and claiming them will not relieve him of his insecurities nor will it make him manly. Nor he is winning over Desai. In fact he is losing over him day by day as when truth comes out Meera and Krish will part ways.
5. Desai started as a villain and now he changed himself for Meera or at least putting it out to her that he is struggling to move on and becoming a hero, While our Krish started as a hero and will soon turn villain through his actions. His cheating and lies are going to bite him hard. He will lose Meera.
Krish will go mad at this point with his insecurities. Once he knows he cannot satisfy Meera, I do not think he can live with her until he can regain her. Same goes with Meera unless her mind and body responds to Krish as it used to be, she will not be able to suppress her desires for ever. What ever that is broken within her , she needs to fix it else she will turn Krish into a person who will cheat her constantly. As some one said here, maybe Meera will end up with Desai for some time and Krish with Maithrei until they figure out.
I am not sure at this point what Krish_999 is trying to say in this story, We asked for rewriting chapters to fill in the gaps and we are getting more gaps and more questions unanswered and also feel at this point the agenda is more to write something unexpected than staying true to the story. No one expected Meera not to realize that Krish is not at home and its dumb esp after Maithrei saying Krish called her from home and Meera is more smart than that and yet we read unexpected outcome, We expected a fight so that was nullified and no one expected cheating from Krish before break up and we got it.
Maybe it was a mistake to even request anything on the story. We should have just let this story go with unanswered questions rather than lose the connect with the characters.
Two questions that were left and were not even raised at all and I feel are more important
1. Krish was supposed to ask her if he was not at home, would she confess to him or not? I wanted to see what Meera would have told him as she agreed to Desai she would hide it. Or even better Krish might say that he heard last few sentences that she agreed to hide it and he could ask her why? Why would she hide it and betray him like that, this question is important because Meera always confesses because she always feels remorse after the effect is gone and out of her self consciousness always confesses unlike Krish.
2. Meera was supposed to ask Krish, why he lost appetite to watch them both and what truly changed him..or if he was truly changed or if he jerked outside the door? Though was feeling guilty its important to ask because she needs to know if he changed or not. We know he didn't change but Meera doesn't know it so a genuine question was important to lay out a fact that Krish is lying and proof will be revealed in future.
Reading Krish POV is biggest torture in this story. Knowing his flaws and pulling your hair for his mistakes has become a routine. I have not seen or read a more pathetic protagonist anywhere in any story so far. He just got into a position where he can drive his life back to the past where both the couple loved each other and yet he managed to screw it with Maithrei and this guy has no morals and righteousness to even confess it to Meera. He has hidden the truth about where he was during their love making and now he cheated on her and managed to hide it, but truth always has a way of finding its own path to light. He did not doubt for a sec that Maithrei might betray him with Desai nor He thought about his recorder in second bedroom which will reveal to Meera that he has not slept in that bedroom that night.
Is Krish_999 trying to solve the unknowns in previous ending or Is he writing different ending? If it was new ending then he could say it here so few set of people like me could bid adieu to this story. As I do not care about different ending and if it was same ending then what's going on right now will make it more harder to believe in a fact that these two really love each other at all or not. Will give few reasons why I think this story has strayed so much from its path.
Meera: Lies and Deceit
1. “I too had moved on, Krish,” Meera said.
Really, she lied to Krish on his face, If she really moved on then why the desperation when she sees Desai and why so much longing when he kisses her. She claims she loves Krish more than anything but lies on his face. I still believe what she has for Krish is Love and what she has for Desai is lust and intimacy that comes with pure lust, but why lie to Krish and herself. She is clinging to this marriage despite knowing that her heart is here with Krish but her mind is trapped with Desai and his memories.
2. “No.” I said. “Because I felt you deserved some action. I haven’t been giving you the best version of me, recently.”
Meera was stunned to hear me say that.
“No, Krish. There’s nothing like that. It happened because of the opportunity… I mean, I would call it greed for more. Or my weakness. Not because I didn’t love you, or didn’t love being with you.”
There is nothing related to Love here, Why can't she open up about what they are going through, even though both know it. She is feeling that passion that is missed from Krish and only found with Desai and though both are trying desperately they are not discussing it. They have not been connected with each other despite being in this marriage so to work on it they need to open about it, and when will they do that and this lack of communication has been dragged so much in this story that at this point this seems like saas bhi kabhi bahu thi serial episode 350.
3. “There’s no need to compare, Krish. Please.”
Really? Then why did you agree to Desai that how does he knew that she is not getting it? Is she multiple split personality? On one end she agrees with Desai that she failed to reconcile with Krish and also agrees that Krish is failing in bed and when she is with Krish she says not to compare with him? Is she trying to protect Krish from the fact that he is failing and it will impact him more if he knew he is no match for Desai? If yes then how did she think he will improve and also add the fact that she cannot fake her orgasm or not get one for ever..that's no way to live in a marriage. So irrespective of whether she is protecting him or herself or her marriage..its bound to fail as eventually this no satisfaction will catch up to them..instead of openly discussing the problem she is concealing it with sweet talk.
4. “At first, after we got back together, I was enthusiastic. I thought I could make it work with Sundeep. But every time I was alone… I found myself thinking about Desai. No matter what Sundeep and I did, it just wasn’t the same.”
It was clear from Nidhi's angle on how exactly Meera must be feeling right now, Author gave this as a perspective for us to understand Meera with out her pov. So if this is true then what is Meera doing to overcome this issue? Instead of fighting it she gave in to Desai. She doesn't have a choice to leave Krish as Nidhi does because unlike Nidhi , Meera loves Krish. so what is the solution..Does it has to go on and on until she couldn't take it anymore and run to Desai? Will she become a slut and pet of Desai and die with guilt of not able to control it over the time? Or will she settle down for Desai's dick than Krish's love?
5. . “It’s not that important to me, Krish. I’m happy with what we have. What you give me is more than enough. I feel loved and cherished.”
Meera has become dumb in this part. She is in denial. If you were happy with what you have then you would never succumb to Desai. You would never try to move on from him and fail.
"It was like he was struggling to move on, just as much as I was.""
What kind of writing is this from Author, there is no clarity for characters. They tell they are desperate in one paragraph and trying to move on in one paragraph and the very next paragraph she says
“It’s not that important to me, Krish. I’m happy with what we have. What you give me is more than enough. I feel loved and cherished.” I am not sure in same episode a person can feel both with out much change unless Meera knows that later is a lie and she is trying to gaslight Krish.
Krish: Low confidence and zero moral conscience, add self destruction to it.
1. Why hide from Meera if he really thinks by hiding in the shelf he now knows how Meera feels with Desai? Its his true chance to make Meera confess her feelings, and yet he chose to run away.
2. “Don’t be,” I said. “Because guilt will only make you lose your grip. If you don’t want Desai to come back, then you need to find a way to forget him. If you truly want to move on, maybe it’s time to find someone new. Someone who’ll make it feel like a fresh start.”
On one hand you give solid advice to Nidhi to forget Desai and she has to find a way. On the other hand you knew Meera is in same situation and yet you are doing nothing to help her. Instead of helping a person who is drug addicted , you are getting yourself one dose from Maithrei. He is hell bent on screwing his marriage, No one in his sane mind will fuck Maithrei at this moment.
3. "Desai had etched himself deeply into the memories of every woman around me. Nidhi. Meera. Ananya."
Whose fault is this and why is Krish naive to question himself why every women around him is coming from Desai's bed in the past? He brought this on Nidhi ,Meera and failed to save Ananya. He is the one to blame for every women's loneliness right now.
4. Meera fucks Desai and she forgets about Krish. Krish fucks Maithrei and forgets about Meera. What kind of marriage is this one? And then they boast dialogues like I can't live with out you and do not want to lose you. On My god I am tired of these sentences. Never ending shower of love while actions show they both crave others. At least I can empathize with Meera considering all women who got same treatment from Desai are going through same phase. What is the excuse for Krish? Maithrei is not Desai's girl. Nidhi is not Desai's girl. Fucking them and claiming them will not relieve him of his insecurities nor will it make him manly. Nor he is winning over Desai. In fact he is losing over him day by day as when truth comes out Meera and Krish will part ways.
5. Desai started as a villain and now he changed himself for Meera or at least putting it out to her that he is struggling to move on and becoming a hero, While our Krish started as a hero and will soon turn villain through his actions. His cheating and lies are going to bite him hard. He will lose Meera.
Krish will go mad at this point with his insecurities. Once he knows he cannot satisfy Meera, I do not think he can live with her until he can regain her. Same goes with Meera unless her mind and body responds to Krish as it used to be, she will not be able to suppress her desires for ever. What ever that is broken within her , she needs to fix it else she will turn Krish into a person who will cheat her constantly. As some one said here, maybe Meera will end up with Desai for some time and Krish with Maithrei until they figure out.
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