[Harry Jordan]

I definitely liked some improvements in this chapter. 

Especially Krish's improvement as a person , he got the first taste of realization that there is a quality about him that attracts women as well. But he is conflicted because of his cuckold nature , and I guess eventually the improvement arc will finally bring out the eventual decision that Krish will make to better his life.


Loved the guilty arc of Meera , she has her flaws but its also an important truth that Meera loves Krish , whether he is good in bed or not. Now whether she'll be pissed about Krish fucking Maithrei , to be frank I don't think so. Maybe that will draw her guilt away that she fucked Desai and maybe make her realize that Krish does indeed love her but did it to feel that he can be a good lover like Desai.


Definitely like the Maithrei angle , and the addition of this new apartment could open the gateway for an intense affair between Krish and Maithrei over there. But at the same time , its clear Desai isn't done , Meera might've said she has moved on , but I have a feeling she will feel vulnerable everytime Desai is near her because it is a truth she has consciously accepted but not willing to say it , Desai gives her the desired orgasms and she likes Desai dominating her. 


I also like that the eventual temporary break-up has been stalled , because it is obviously predictable. It has happened in the past and for the characters to go that path all over again feels a very bland approach. I dig that both Krish and Meera are not perfect individuals but they can eventually work this out. Both these characters are more emotionally intertwined to each other than you think.


In my opinion , making this story a two way affair for a while where Krish improves his skills and starts to have intensity in his lovemaking will eventually improve his character. And maybe one day Meera will see that improvement and get the strength to put a full stop on Desai once and for all. Either way this story is developing in a nice way. I am definitely looking forward for the next update!