09-11-2024, 03:23 PM
(09-11-2024, 02:56 PM)NityaSakti Wrote: I thought it is a cheating wife story, but seeing imran as impotent husband that cannot satisfy maya and accept her to open the legs to others made a complete disappointment. i did not feel like reading it further. Where is the exitement and thrill when something of this sort happens.
I totally get your point, and I can see how this direction might not have been as exciting for you. I wanted to explore Maya’s pent-up desires due to her upbringing and Imran's impotence, but I see now that it might have lacked the thrill you're looking for. If I’d made Imran more possessive, the whole dynamic would’ve changed. I have plans to introduce more conflict later on—maybe antagonist character with a revenge or blackmail arc with cheating elements—to bring that tension back. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
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